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	<title>Comments on: What is deep POV?</title>
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	<description>mysteries to fall in love with, romance to keep you in suspense</description>
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		<title>By: &#8220;Keep your head down and just WRITE&#8221;&#8230; or &#8220;How to empty your water pitcher&#8221; &#171; sheridan edmondson</title>
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		<dc:creator>&#8220;Keep your head down and just WRITE&#8221;&#8230; or &#8220;How to empty your water pitcher&#8221; &#171; sheridan edmondson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Jun 2011 18:01:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] attended conferences, listened to lectures, and taken classes. I&#8217;ve studied deep point-of-view,  characterization, the hero and heroine archetypes, creating hooks, writing strong opening [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/deep-pov/#comment-5078</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2011 21:52:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hope you find it helpful! Note that the series is also available as a free PDF. Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hope you find it helpful! Note that the series is also available as a free PDF. Good luck!</p>
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		<title>By: Paula Bruno</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/deep-pov/#comment-5076</link>
		<dc:creator>Paula Bruno</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jan 2011 14:42:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I entered my novel Come Hell or High Water in the Writers&#039; Digest Self Published Award contest and recieved my critique yesterday.  Mostly, the critique was positive. One of the suggestions for improving the story was to &#039;deepen the point of view&quot; of the main character.  Although I have no plans to re-write this book, it is the first in a series of five, so I want to learn more about deep pov in order to make the sequels better.  This looks like it might be the place to learn.  Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I entered my novel Come Hell or High Water in the Writers&#8217; Digest Self Published Award contest and recieved my critique yesterday.  Mostly, the critique was positive. One of the suggestions for improving the story was to &#8216;deepen the point of view&#8221; of the main character.  Although I have no plans to re-write this book, it is the first in a series of five, so I want to learn more about deep pov in order to make the sequels better.  This looks like it might be the place to learn.  Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Wednesday Writing &#124; Ciara Knight</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wednesday Writing &#124; Ciara Knight</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Sep 2010 10:53:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Here are some online resources for you to take a look at: http://www.autocrit.com/websitepublisher/articles/12/1/Emotional-Depth-4-Deep-Point-of-View/Page1.html http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/deep-pov/ [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Here are some online resources for you to take a look at: <a href="http://www.autocrit.com/websitepublisher/articles/12/1/Emotional-Depth-4-Deep-Point-of-View/Page1.html">http://www.autocrit.com/websitepublisher/articles/12/1/Emotional-Depth-4-Deep-Point-of-View/Page1.html</a> <a href="http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/deep-pov/">http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/deep-pov/</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Kathryn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kathryn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Dec 2009 02:40:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awesome, thank you very much. I had thought as much, but you describe it succinctly!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Awesome, thank you very much. I had thought as much, but you describe it succinctly!</p>
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