Comments on: Eliminate “scaffolding” for elegant deep POV http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/scaffolding-deep-pov/ mysteries to fall in love with, romance to keep you in suspense Sat, 19 May 2012 20:11:08 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Trisha Puddle http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/scaffolding-deep-pov/#comment-259 Trisha Puddle Sun, 26 Jul 2009 22:01:56 +0000 http://jordanmccollum.com/?p=410#comment-259 This is great information, Jordan. I struggle with this sometimes, but this post helps. By the way, was it your fifth wedding anniversary? If it was, I hope you had a happy one. :) I do try to avoid 'head words', but sometimes, I think they're needed. If a critter suggests I take them out, and I like them, I wait for more opinions before removing them. This is great information, Jordan. I struggle with this sometimes, but this post helps.

By the way, was it your fifth wedding anniversary? If it was, I hope you had a happy one. :)

I do try to avoid ‘head words’, but sometimes, I think they’re needed. If a critter suggests I take them out, and I like them, I wait for more opinions before removing them.

]]> By: Elise Logan http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/07/scaffolding-deep-pov/#comment-251 Elise Logan Sun, 26 Jul 2009 15:44:34 +0000 http://jordanmccollum.com/?p=410#comment-251 Thank you for this elegant and beautifully simple discussion of how to go deeper in POV. I know a lot of writers who struggle with this, so the information is extremely valuable. Thank you for this elegant and beautifully simple discussion of how to go deeper in POV. I know a lot of writers who struggle with this, so the information is extremely valuable.

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