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	<title>Comments on: Your character&#8217;s thoughts&#8212;in real time</title>
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		<title>By: Elise Logan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Elise Logan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Jul 2009 15:49:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ll third the thanks for this helpful series.</description>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 22:24:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Don&#8212;I&#039;m so glad you&#039;re finding this helpful. I was beginning to wonder if anyone was even reading these, so I&#039;m really glad to get these comments today!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Don&mdash;I&#8217;m so glad you&#8217;re finding this helpful. I was beginning to wonder if anyone was even reading these, so I&#8217;m really glad to get these comments today!</p>
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		<title>By: Don Carey</title>
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		<dc:creator>Don Carey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 20:12:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is a very helpful series. The POVs in my current work certainly need to be deeper. Thanks for helping with this.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is a very helpful series. The POVs in my current work certainly need to be deeper. Thanks for helping with this.</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 12:42:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Trisha!</description>
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		<title>By: Trisha Puddle</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 17 Jul 2009 09:04:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Jordan. I loved this post. It helped me heaps. When I begin writing the thoughts of my MC, an eight-year-old girl, she’s taken over. What appears on my computer screen is something I have no conscious thought of. I usually have to stop for a good laugh because my character is so weird. I never get stuck for ideas, but sometimes have to rewrite and add more detail.

If I wake in the night with an idea, I have to get up and write it down before it’s lost.

I love your posts, Jordan and can’t wait for the next one.

Trish.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Jordan. I loved this post. It helped me heaps. When I begin writing the thoughts of my MC, an eight-year-old girl, she’s taken over. What appears on my computer screen is something I have no conscious thought of. I usually have to stop for a good laugh because my character is so weird. I never get stuck for ideas, but sometimes have to rewrite and add more detail.</p>
<p>If I wake in the night with an idea, I have to get up and write it down before it’s lost.</p>
<p>I love your posts, Jordan and can’t wait for the next one.</p>
<p>Trish.</p>
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