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		<title>By: Michelle</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Aug 2009 03:25:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Although the &quot;Masterfully Written&quot; is something of a pipe dream for me at least. (not for Annette tho)  And, like Annette, I love to read a book where I am wowed with the writing. I honestly hope that some time I get the &quot;can&#039;t put it down&quot; comment about some thing I write. I know I am not the great writer but I hope that I am at least the good story teller that doesnt have too many errors to trip up the reader. 

Michelle</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Although the &#8220;Masterfully Written&#8221; is something of a pipe dream for me at least. (not for Annette tho)  And, like Annette, I love to read a book where I am wowed with the writing. I honestly hope that some time I get the &#8220;can&#8217;t put it down&#8221; comment about some thing I write. I know I am not the great writer but I hope that I am at least the good story teller that doesnt have too many errors to trip up the reader. </p>
<p>Michelle</p>
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		<title>By: Elise Logan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Elise Logan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 23:56:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;d rather a reader enjoy the book so much they get lost in the story and be unable to put it down. To me that says that I, as a storyteller, did my job. Similarly thrilling reviews would be &quot;Engrossing&quot; or &quot;I loved this book.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;d rather a reader enjoy the book so much they get lost in the story and be unable to put it down. To me that says that I, as a storyteller, did my job. Similarly thrilling reviews would be &#8220;Engrossing&#8221; or &#8220;I loved this book.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/08/dream-review/#comment-338</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 23:17:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Deb&#8212;Congrats on being first&#8212;you got there even before I did. I hope you get your wish!

Andrew (oh, can I call you Andrew?)&#8212;LOL, if you can wait until I have that kind of credentials, send it my way. But don&#039;t hold your breath for me to get to 75. I&#039;d be thrilled with one. Or, hey, one published book ;) .

Annette&#8212;I totally hear you! That&#039;s why I was torn, too. (I went for &quot;Do we have to choose?&quot;, but so far I&#039;m alone.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Deb&mdash;Congrats on being first&mdash;you got there even before I did. I hope you get your wish!</p>
<p>Andrew (oh, can I call you Andrew?)&mdash;LOL, if you can wait until I have that kind of credentials, send it my way. But don&#8217;t hold your breath for me to get to 75. I&#8217;d be thrilled with one. Or, hey, one published book <img src='http://jordanmccollum.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  .</p>
<p>Annette&mdash;I totally hear you! That&#8217;s why I was torn, too. (I went for &#8220;Do we have to choose?&#8221;, but so far I&#8217;m alone.)</p>
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		<title>By: Annette</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/08/dream-review/#comment-337</link>
		<dc:creator>Annette</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 23:11:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Tricky one, and I&#039;ve gotten reviews, so I can speak from some experience.

On the one hand, I LOVE getting feedback from readers who say they couldn&#039;t put my book down. I get this perverse pleasure from knowing I kept someone up until three AM. It really is sick, but I love hearing that kind of thing.

On the other hand, I really, really care about craft--to the level that most readers will never notice. Craft isn&#039;t usually what keeps someone glued to the page until three AM. 

There are writers I read who I put down and think, &quot;Dang, I&#039;ll never be as good as that,&quot; and it&#039;s not because they kept me up at night, but because they crafted the story or the characters or even the SENTENCES themselves so perfectly.

So I guess on the one hand, I&#039;ll totally take the &quot;I couldn&#039;t put it down!&quot; reviews and cherish those comments, but I do dream of getting the &quot;Wow, she&#039;s a master&quot; review, although if I ever get one, it&#039;ll be years hence. I not delusional enough to think I&#039;m there yet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Tricky one, and I&#8217;ve gotten reviews, so I can speak from some experience.</p>
<p>On the one hand, I LOVE getting feedback from readers who say they couldn&#8217;t put my book down. I get this perverse pleasure from knowing I kept someone up until three AM. It really is sick, but I love hearing that kind of thing.</p>
<p>On the other hand, I really, really care about craft&#8211;to the level that most readers will never notice. Craft isn&#8217;t usually what keeps someone glued to the page until three AM. </p>
<p>There are writers I read who I put down and think, &#8220;Dang, I&#8217;ll never be as good as that,&#8221; and it&#8217;s not because they kept me up at night, but because they crafted the story or the characters or even the SENTENCES themselves so perfectly.</p>
<p>So I guess on the one hand, I&#8217;ll totally take the &#8220;I couldn&#8217;t put it down!&#8221; reviews and cherish those comments, but I do dream of getting the &#8220;Wow, she&#8217;s a master&#8221; review, although if I ever get one, it&#8217;ll be years hence. I not delusional enough to think I&#8217;m there yet.</p>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/08/dream-review/#comment-336</link>
		<dc:creator>Iapetus999</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Aug 2009 22:50:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My dream review would be
&quot;Best thing I&#039;ve ever read. Great use of Deep POV--Jordan McCollum, author of 75 NYT bestsellers&quot;
:)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My dream review would be<br />
&#8220;Best thing I&#8217;ve ever read. Great use of Deep POV&#8211;Jordan McCollum, author of 75 NYT bestsellers&#8221;<br />
 <img src='http://jordanmccollum.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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