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	<title>Comments on: Highlighting your works&#8212;Michelle Jefferies review</title>
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		<title>By: michelle</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/12/highlighting-worksmichelle-jefferies-review/#comment-1501</link>
		<dc:creator>michelle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2009 03:38:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jordan ans Kathleen, 
Thank you for the excellent website review. I have learned alot from it and the others. This is my first real shot at a website and when I saw that I could get a free one I jumped at the opportunity seeing the potential for practice and exposure. I don&#039;t have a great picture unfortunately, another one of those things that has to wait for extra dollars like buying a domain site. But I am working on it. 

I will fix the typos, change the books page, move the award and define my genre. 

As for the initial I googled my name when I first started to write and found many Michelle Jefferies (which is odd because the spelling of my last name is rare). I added the C. because it made me diferent from the other Michelle&#039;s out there. Facebook was even more inundated with Michelle Jefferies than the google search. 

Again THANK YOU for the oportunity and the great critique. I apreciate it. 
Michelle</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jordan ans Kathleen,<br />
Thank you for the excellent website review. I have learned alot from it and the others. This is my first real shot at a website and when I saw that I could get a free one I jumped at the opportunity seeing the potential for practice and exposure. I don&#8217;t have a great picture unfortunately, another one of those things that has to wait for extra dollars like buying a domain site. But I am working on it. </p>
<p>I will fix the typos, change the books page, move the award and define my genre. </p>
<p>As for the initial I googled my name when I first started to write and found many Michelle Jefferies (which is odd because the spelling of my last name is rare). I added the C. because it made me diferent from the other Michelle&#8217;s out there. Facebook was even more inundated with Michelle Jefferies than the google search. </p>
<p>Again THANK YOU for the oportunity and the great critique. I apreciate it.<br />
Michelle</p>
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		<title>By: sportifs</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/12/highlighting-worksmichelle-jefferies-review/#comment-1438</link>
		<dc:creator>sportifs</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Dec 2009 21:14:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>excellent discussion going on here. Very enlightening.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>excellent discussion going on here. Very enlightening.</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2009/12/highlighting-worksmichelle-jefferies-review/#comment-1423</link>
		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2009 23:39:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>LOL, I totally understand avoidance! 

On the other hand, as I told Michelle, I don&#039;t think you have to have all of your works and WIPs on your site. I have at least five other things I could put up there (three ideas in various stages of development, two finished works), but right now I&#039;m choosing not to. I was actually worried when I made the page that I wouldn&#039;t have enough things to put on it!

Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>LOL, I totally understand avoidance! </p>
<p>On the other hand, as I told Michelle, I don&#8217;t think you have to have all of your works and WIPs on your site. I have at least five other things I could put up there (three ideas in various stages of development, two finished works), but right now I&#8217;m choosing not to. I was actually worried when I made the page that I wouldn&#8217;t have enough things to put on it!</p>
<p>Good luck!</p>
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		<title>By: Becke Davis (Becke Martin)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Becke Davis (Becke Martin)</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2009 16:01:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Clearly, you are more artistic and technically skilled than I am, but I still may give it a shot. I like the way you promote the titles that are still in work. Geesh, you&#039;ve given me a lot of work to do - got to make sure I have tag lines and blurbs for all the stories I&#039;m working on, and try to make mock-covers, too!

It&#039;s funny, I am a visual person so I like to have some kind of graphic as a &quot;cover&quot; image when I&#039;m working on a story. I hadn&#039;t really thought that much about what the real covers would look like if I ever sell a book. My critique partner recently made her first sale and she just got her cover proof from the art department. It&#039;s so gorgeous, I&#039;m now totally jealous. I have covers on the brain. Maybe I should just get back to writing -- avoidance much?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Clearly, you are more artistic and technically skilled than I am, but I still may give it a shot. I like the way you promote the titles that are still in work. Geesh, you&#8217;ve given me a lot of work to do &#8211; got to make sure I have tag lines and blurbs for all the stories I&#8217;m working on, and try to make mock-covers, too!</p>
<p>It&#8217;s funny, I am a visual person so I like to have some kind of graphic as a &#8220;cover&#8221; image when I&#8217;m working on a story. I hadn&#8217;t really thought that much about what the real covers would look like if I ever sell a book. My critique partner recently made her first sale and she just got her cover proof from the art department. It&#8217;s so gorgeous, I&#8217;m now totally jealous. I have covers on the brain. Maybe I should just get back to writing &#8212; avoidance much?</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2009 15:42:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Becke! I&#039;ve never really thought they were that great, but I haven&#039;t dared to ask anyone. I used photos I found on sxc.hu and Flickr and made composites for the covers for most of them with the default image program on my computer.

The two big things I did to try to make them look &quot;professional&quot; were drop shadows behind the titles and the whole covers. The exact method for doing that can vary; a lot of programs have a way to do it automatically, but I prefer to do it by hand (copying the text and changing the color to gray, then moving it behind the original title and offsetting it a little, for the title; creating a gray rectangle the same size as the cover, offsetting it by 5 px, softening the edges and moving it behind the cover).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Becke! I&#8217;ve never really thought they were that great, but I haven&#8217;t dared to ask anyone. I used photos I found on sxc.hu and Flickr and made composites for the covers for most of them with the default image program on my computer.</p>
<p>The two big things I did to try to make them look &#8220;professional&#8221; were drop shadows behind the titles and the whole covers. The exact method for doing that can vary; a lot of programs have a way to do it automatically, but I prefer to do it by hand (copying the text and changing the color to gray, then moving it behind the original title and offsetting it a little, for the title; creating a gray rectangle the same size as the cover, offsetting it by 5 px, softening the edges and moving it behind the cover).</p>
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