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	<title>Comments on: Assessing your suspense with pacing and promises</title>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 21:09:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Andrew&#8212;You&#039;re way ahead of the game ;)

@Joylene&#8212;LOL, don&#039;t worry, I&#039;m doing this series to learn right along with you. They say you learn the most by teaching, after all. I haven&#039;t sprung for Maass&#039;s workbook yet (I have the book, though), but I&#039;ve seen some excerpts from the section on tension and it&#039;s great stuff. Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Andrew&mdash;You&#8217;re way ahead of the game <img src='http://jordanmccollum.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>@Joylene&mdash;LOL, don&#8217;t worry, I&#8217;m doing this series to learn right along with you. They say you learn the most by teaching, after all. I haven&#8217;t sprung for Maass&#8217;s workbook yet (I have the book, though), but I&#8217;ve seen some excerpts from the section on tension and it&#8217;s great stuff. Good luck!</p>
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		<title>By: joylene</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2010/01/assessing-suspense/#comment-2201</link>
		<dc:creator>joylene</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 20:58:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I feel guilty for doing this for free. Feels as if I should pay someone. Thanks, Jordan, for your help and generosity. I&#039;m doing these exercises in conjunction with Donald Maass&#039; book Writing the Breakout Novel workbook. I cannot lose.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I feel guilty for doing this for free. Feels as if I should pay someone. Thanks, Jordan, for your help and generosity. I&#8217;m doing these exercises in conjunction with Donald Maass&#8217; book Writing the Breakout Novel workbook. I cannot lose.</p>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
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		<dc:creator>Iapetus999</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 Jan 2010 00:35:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I definitely understand the promise stuff but I haven&#039;t looked at pacing much. It&#039;s on my to-do list.
I already have a scene/setting map i can start with.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I definitely understand the promise stuff but I haven&#8217;t looked at pacing much. It&#8217;s on my to-do list.<br />
I already have a scene/setting map i can start with.</p>
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