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	<title>Comments on: Conflict and suspense in structure: Act I</title>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
		<link>http://jordanmccollum.com/2010/01/conflict-suspense-structure-act/#comment-2137</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 22:24:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well, I only mentioned the &quot;outer&quot; stakes.
Her inner stakes are much larger, and get revealed throughout the book.
Definitely withhold the backstory as late as possible, but give the reader something to hold onto in the mean time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well, I only mentioned the &#8220;outer&#8221; stakes.<br />
Her inner stakes are much larger, and get revealed throughout the book.<br />
Definitely withhold the backstory as late as possible, but give the reader something to hold onto in the mean time.</p>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 21:25:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>(I hoped I did, too&#8212;but the beginning is where I need the most help, sadly.)

I agree&#8212;set up a central problem ASAP. Use something to pull the readers in, and establish that suspense. Suspense, after all, is unanswered questions.

On the other hand, of course, don&#039;t give them too much. In Maass&#039;s Breakout Novel, he uses the example of John Grisham&#039;s The Partner, where Grisham withholds a main character&#039;s motivation until very late in the novel, but keeps suspense by keeping the stakes and motivations high for the other characters looking for him. Sounds like a pretty tough balance to hit, of course.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>(I hoped I did, too&mdash;but the beginning is where I need the most help, sadly.)</p>
<p>I agree&mdash;set up a central problem ASAP. Use something to pull the readers in, and establish that suspense. Suspense, after all, is unanswered questions.</p>
<p>On the other hand, of course, don&#8217;t give them too much. In Maass&#8217;s Breakout Novel, he uses the example of John Grisham&#8217;s The Partner, where Grisham withholds a main character&#8217;s motivation until very late in the novel, but keeps suspense by keeping the stakes and motivations high for the other characters looking for him. Sounds like a pretty tough balance to hit, of course.</p>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 21:16:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think (hope) I did a good job with that:
Plot Conflict: My MC leaves town to find a man
Character Conflict: She has very high standards
Stakes: People at home are depending on her success

One piece advice I&#039;d add:
Don&#039;t beat around the bush. Just tell the reader what the issue is, preferably from the first line/paragraph with the main character. I call this the &quot;problem statement.&quot; This statement leads to something known as the &quot;story question.&quot;

So if my First Line was something like, &quot;John slammed the phone down, severing the connection with his wife.&quot;
the problem statement could be, &quot;John is having marital issues&quot; and the story question could be, &quot;does John reconcile with his wife or move on?&quot;

The sooner you bring the reader in, the better.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think (hope) I did a good job with that:<br />
Plot Conflict: My MC leaves town to find a man<br />
Character Conflict: She has very high standards<br />
Stakes: People at home are depending on her success</p>
<p>One piece advice I&#8217;d add:<br />
Don&#8217;t beat around the bush. Just tell the reader what the issue is, preferably from the first line/paragraph with the main character. I call this the &#8220;problem statement.&#8221; This statement leads to something known as the &#8220;story question.&#8221;</p>
<p>So if my First Line was something like, &#8220;John slammed the phone down, severing the connection with his wife.&#8221;<br />
the problem statement could be, &#8220;John is having marital issues&#8221; and the story question could be, &#8220;does John reconcile with his wife or move on?&#8221;</p>
<p>The sooner you bring the reader in, the better.</p>
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