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	<title>Comments on: Jump into the action</title>
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	<description>mysteries to fall in love with, romance to keep you in suspense</description>
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		<title>By: Jordan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jordan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Apr 2010 22:32:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Both. First line this time, if possible.

And great advice on dialogue!</description>
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<p>And great advice on dialogue!</p>
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		<title>By: Iapetus999</title>
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		<dc:creator>Iapetus999</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 29 Apr 2010 22:14:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When you say &quot;start&quot; do you mean the novel or a scene?
Yeah, just make something happen. Don&#039;t explain. In fact, don&#039;t *ever* explain anything. If there&#039;s knowledge missing, then have one character ask another character. As long as that first character doesn&#039;t know it already.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When you say &#8220;start&#8221; do you mean the novel or a scene?<br />
Yeah, just make something happen. Don&#8217;t explain. In fact, don&#8217;t *ever* explain anything. If there&#8217;s knowledge missing, then have one character ask another character. As long as that first character doesn&#8217;t know it already.</p>
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