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Setting with distant POV

This entry is part 3 of 6 in the series Power in settings

It’s a lot easier to create an emotional response in readers by using your characters’ emotions. But not every scene and not every description is going to lend itself to a character’s viewpoint. Often we see scenes (or books) that start with an almost panoramic view of the setting, as if we’re sweeping through the scene with a movie camera. There aren’t any characters in view, or no characters who can make emotional and perceptual judgments to guide our readers’ responses.

However, we can still use the setting to establish the emotional tone. Instead of relying on a character’s emotional responses and filter to create the tone, we can try to evoke the same emotion directly with the imagery from the scene.

While this technique can be more direct, it can also be a bit more difficult. Manipulating readers’ emotions directly—without getting caught—is a tricky business. (Or maybe I’m just too sensitive—I even resent TV commercials for emotionally manipulating me.)

Obviously, one of the methods you can use to set the emotional tone is imagery. Picking the right image is key, too: focusing on a gray bunny hopping along the forest trail instead of the finger-like, grasping shadows of the trees will undermine the scary tone you’re shooting for. Even if the bunny is important—a “clue,” something you need for later—we have to frame that in the right emotions. Perhaps it skitters nervously down the path, fleeing something unknown, or perhaps we only perceive it as a rustling in the leaves.

Personally, I still prefer using characters as a vehicle for this: by giving them the emotional responses we desire in our readers, we can create those responses more subtly and more easily. But maybe using our characters just helps us to focus our emotional effects, and with care, we can create a tone just as powerfully as we can through our characters.

What do you think? How can we set an emotional tone with a setting, and without characters?

Photo by Hamed Saber

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3 Responses to Setting with distant POV

  1. Congrats on the beautiful babe, Jordan.
    I think you can set an emotional tone using light and shadow, weather, and the type of setting itself. Are you on a deserted beach, in a dank medievel castle with flickering lights, or on the streets of a dusty, deserted ghost town. The feel will be completely different if you set it up right. There doesn’t have to be someone there to describe the smell, sight and sound of the place that gives depth and insight to a reader.

    • Jordan says:

      There doesn’t have to be, but as I said in an earlier post in this series, it’s a lot easier to create emotions in readers when the places we describe have an emotional effect on our characters beyond just the empirical facts of the setting. It’s the characters’ emotional responses that make the settings more powerful. Allowing our characters to interpret and react to the setting might be more effective because we can make sure we’re creating the right effect in someone instead of just relying on the readers to piece together things that sound scary/idyllic/whatever—and because our readers get to see the effect the place has on other people. Having the reaction and the psychological effects displayed can powerfully reinforce the imagery, creating a stronger effect.

  2. kbrebes says:

    I always enjoy your blog posts and learn something helpful. Thanks, Jordan.

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