Posts Tagged “character thoughts”

21 07 2009

Eliminate “scaffolding” for elegant deep POV

Posted by Jordan in Technique, tags: , , , , ,
This entry is part 6 of 12 in the series Deep POV

Using “he thought” and “she knew” to reinforce deep POV can actually take our readers out of the story. Eliminate them to let your story shine through.

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