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Real-life helicopter rescue: Torn Canvas blog tour!!

Donna K. Weaver joins us today, touring with the second book in her Safe Harbors series, Torn Canvas—and a giveaway!Torn_Canvas_Front_Full_Res_WEBVERSION

First, a bit more about the book—then, we’ll get to hear about Donna’s experience when a fellow passenger needed a real life helicopter rescue from their cruise ship!

Even a hero needs rescuing sometimes.

Modern-day pirates took more than Jori Virtanen’s friends; they stole his face. Not only does the twenty-four-year-old former model have to confront months of reconstructive surgery, he discovers his previous life was as superficial as his looks. Jori struggles to make a new life for himself as an artist while evading the press. They expect a hero, but he knows the truth. His beauty masks a beast.

Olivia Howard’s given up a normal life for her job, and the sacrifices are finally paying off. The twenty-six-year-old talk-show host’s ratings are heading to the top of the charts. Her dream is to make a difference in people’s lives, but the studio wants mind fluff—like interviewing hot model Jori Virtanen. When Olivia learns the guy helped rescue passengers on a cruise excursion from kidnappers, she knows this is the story she needs to make her case. The only problem is the hero was injured, and now he’s disappeared.

The more Olivia learns about the man behind the scar, the more intrigued she becomes. But Jori is no girl’s happily ever after. Once she finds him, Olivia has to free his heart and help heal the beast.

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Jordan asked me to talk a little bit about any interesting experiences I might have had while cruising. I am a Navy brat. I was five when my family moved to South Korea to join my father who was stationed in Seoul, and that was when I first sailed the Pacific. By the time I was thirteen, I had sailed the Pacific three times. Loved it–even if the first two trips were on Navy transports. Not exactly like a cruise ship, but still cool because I was at sea.

My most recent experience was last January. My husband and I took an eighteen-day circle anniversary cruise to Hawaii. We sailed from San Diego on the evening of January 21st. The water was pretty rough. Even on modern ships with ballast systems to help with stabilization, it takes time to get your sea legs. It’s during these times that passengers are the most vulnerable to accident.

Evidently, the night before, someone had fallen on the stairs. In the process this person had knocked a woman down. She hadn’t been so lucky. She broke a leg and had some head trauma, including bleeding from the ear. After consulting with the ship doctors and the mainland, the captain made the decision to turn the ship around so we could meet up with a Coast Guard helicopter to life flight the poor woman to a hospital.

We were not allowed to watch the actual event. As you can imagine, an actual helicopter evacuation is quite dangerous. If something were to happen—like the helicopter crashing into the ship—the fewer passengers in harm’s way, the better. Later during a class where the executive officer explained how the bridge worked, they included a video of the evacuation.

The woman survived, but there wasn’t room on the helicopter for both the doctor and her husband. That poor man had to turn around and sail five days to Hawaii so he could catch a plane to come and join his wife. Then, our island itinerary had to be changed around to account for the lost day. They did everything they could to preserve as much as possible, but people still complained. Enough that the Captain finally had to speak up about it and remind everyone that the woman’s life was more important than their vacations.

I watched various videos on YouTube when I was writing Torn Canvas because Jori has to be life flighted after his injuries fighting the pirates. While the other freed captives are sailed back to Pago Pago, American Samoa, Jori requires more immediate medical attention. I never dreamed I would ever be on a ship where there was a helicopter rescue.

Following is an excerpt from that scene:

With a jolt, the stabbing pain returned, worse than before. Jori tried to open his eyes, but only the right lid would work. Immediately, a shaft of a bright light forced him to close it. Was that a helicopter? He tried to move but found he had been strapped to some kind of board. Even his head was tied in place. His heart began to race, and it was difficult to breathe.

Jori struggled against what held him, pausing when a warm hand brushed his forehead.

“It’s okay.” Elle sounded scared. He jerked against the restraint harder. “Please don’t move,” she said. Over his face, her red, puffy eyes filled with tears.

“Why am I tied up?” Jori breathed out. He closed his eye and forced his rigid muscles to relax. Hadn’t they just fought the pirates? Opening his eye again, Jori pulled against the binding on his wrists.

“Shhh. You’re hurt.” She stroked his hair again, a tear dropping to the side of his forehead and running into his hair. “The Coast Guard is here to fly you to the hospital in Pago Pago.”

“Sir,” said a man in a military jumpsuit and helmet, stepping into view, “we’re going to lift you now. Please don’t move.” The man gave a signal.

With the motion, Jori’s heart beat even harder, making the pounding in his head worse. There was something he needed to remember—

“Wait! Elle ….”

“They’re sailing us back!” The wind blew away the rest of her words as the swaying ropes pulled him toward the helicopter.

With the motion, Jori closed his eyes and clenched his fingers on the board beneath him. He refused to think about what the weaving back and forth meant. He was at Disneyland and not about to smash against the ship or the helicopter.

The sound of the blades was now deafening. Forcing a convulsive swallow, Jori took a deep breath. Motion sickness tore through his stomach, and he gagged. What if he threw up and couldn’t turn over? What if he choked to death on it?

“Shiiiiiiii—” The board bumped something, and Jori’s eye snapped open, his heart skipping a beat.

“We have you, sir,” said a woman’s voice.

 

I’m really excited to read this one! You can too!

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Donna WeaverAbout the Author

Donna K. Weaver is the author of the Safe Harbors series and Second Chances 101, Book 5 in the Ripple Effect series. She’s a wife, mother, grandmother, Harry Potter geek, Army veteran, and karate black belt.

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Cover reveal! Hope’s Watch by Donna K. Weaver

Donna K. Weaver and I launched our first novels together in a joint party (that was a raving success!!). Donna’s publisher sadly had to close its doors in the interim, but I’m happy to report that Donna is forging ahead on her own, and her next release is coming out next month!

Hope’s Watch

Elle Reinhardt loves people and has a gift for turning groups of strangers into friends. When she talks her best friend Lyn into taking a month-long Pacific cruise, Elle is in her element, gathering fellow passengers to her. But things go horribly wrong when a ship excursion ends in death and disaster at the hands of modern-day pirates.

Filled with her own emotional wounds from the experience, Elle tries desperately to buoy up the grieving loved ones as they wait for news on those lost at sea. Malcolm Armstrong, friend of one of the missing men, arrives to act as family spokesman. Elle knows it’s unreasonable, but she resents his presence. When Mal offers the strength she so desperately needs, will she be able to let go of her animosity and accept his support?

And the cover!

Hope's Watch by Donna K. Weaver
Cover design by Melissa Williams

This ebook-exclusive short story includes special excerpts from both A Change of Plans and Torn Canvas (coming April 2014), books 1 and 2 of the Safe Harbors Series.

Coming January 16, 2014

A Change of Plans. Also available in audiobook.
Lyn wants to move on. She just doesn’t realize it will take pirates, shipwreck, and an intriguing surgeon to do it.

 

Donna K. Weaver’s Secret Sauce: Overused Words

Donna-Author Pic 2013by Donna K. Weaver

Some time ago, I was reading about the use of the word “that.” I’m quite fond of it and decided to do a search of my ms and see how many times I used it.

914 times.

I then did a search and replace, inspecting each use and evaluating it. I eliminated over 300 uses of that word. I noticed other instances where I could better phrase the sentences and get rid of some more. I didn’t want to make a lot of sentence structure changes then, so as I’m going through and looking for times to ‘show and not tell’ I’m also looking at that word.

Is that a filler word? Like the word ‘like’. You, like, you know, want to go, like, to the store, and you know, like you see this like hunky guy, you know, and you so drool on yourself.

English classes teach us really bad habits. I found that out the hard way—in business writing. Instructors would give us assignments to write a 500-word paper. What did we do? We wrote the longest, most complicated sentences we could imagine in order to hit that magical 500-word mark. All those extra words didn’t make our point better, didn’t make it easier to understand, and probably didn’t make it any more fun to read.

Then we get into the real business world where we’re told correspondence better not be longer than one page. Business people are busy and a lengthy letter is likely to be set aside. There’s an interesting article here with some suggestions for when to eliminate ‘that.’

“That” is an example of an overused word. There are lots of them. One good place to find out where some of yours might be is autocrit. You can plug in some of your writing and it will evaluate it—500 words for free. There are also other software programs that do this.

And our host, Jordan, has a Word macro which cuts and pastes all the sentences using your crutch words into a new document if you already know what your writing crutches are.

Do you know what words you overuse or rely on too much?

About the Author
a-change-of-plansDonna K. Weaver is a Navy brat who joined the Army and has lived in Asia and Europe. Because she sailed the Pacific three times as a child, she loves cruising and wishes she could accrue enough vacation time to do more of it with her husband. After recording city council minutes for twenty years, Donna decided to write something a little longer and with a lot more emotion–and kissing.

Donna’s first novel, A Change of Plans debuted earlier this month. When Lyn sets off on her supposedly uncomplicated and unromantic cruise, she never dreams it will include pirates. She finds herself drawn to Braedon, an intriguing surgeon—but her emotional baggage dashes her hopes for a happy ending. Paradise turns to piracy when their party is kidnapped and Lyn’s fear of a fairytale turns grim. Now she must fight alongside the man she rejected, first for their freedom and then against storms, sharks, and shipwreck.

What’s a writer’s night?

This week, Donna K. Weaver and I are hosting a writers’ night (Wednesday, June 19, 7-8 PM, American Fork [Utah] Public Library). The #1 question on everyone’s mind has been What’s a writers’ night?

mini poster2Answer: a night of learning, games and fun for writers! Donna and I will each be making a very short presentation on some aspect of writing—I think Donna will be having fun with apostrophes, and I’ll be digging into show, don’t tell. We’re hoping to make our presentations appeal to writers on all different skill levels, so whether you’re a multi-published author or a total n00b, we’ll all be able to have fun and learn together.

Once we get that learning stuff out of the way, it will be time for writing games! What kind of games? Games to help writers dig into body language, create cool images, generate new ideas and have fun! Plus we’ll generate some extreme flash fiction. What’s not to love about that?

So come join us!

Also coming up: Canada Day AWESOMENESS at the Pleasant Grove City Library! July 1, 7-9 PM! Read more!

What would you do for a writers’ night?

The book launch!

I’d be remiss if I didn’t share some about my book launch!

Donna put together a great montage of all the highlights:

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Donna & Me answering questions

A few more shots of me:

book launch signing

book launch lecture

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Me signing Me lecturing my 7-year-old to stop asking for my Sharpies!!! Me with author Michelle Davidson Argyle

To be totally honest, I think my reading went terribly—talking slow takes a lot of effort for me, and I needed more to set up the scene. Sigh. But that’s okay. I’ve finally dispelled the lingering gloom from that, and nobody hates me because of it. . . . Right?

Thanks to everyone who came out to support us—and many thanks to the Orem Public Library, Donna, Kristi, & Kim for making this event unforgettable!

Spies & Pirates Book Launch Party!

If you’ve been on my Facebook page recently, you’ve probably seen a bit about my upcoming book launch party! Donna K. Weaver and I are celebrating our debut novels together!

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Come join us for readings, a self-defense demo with Sensei Kristi & Sensei Kim, book signings, and light refreshments! (Yes, there’s food. I know, I wouldn’t go unless there was food, too.) And yes, we will have copies of our books for sale!

A Change of Plans Cover Reveal!

I’m excited today to help my friend Donna K. Weaver with her cover reveal! Her clean adventure romance, A Change of Plans is coming June 1 from Rhemalda Publishing.

About the book

When Lyn sets off on her supposedly uncomplicated and unromantic cruise, she never dreams it will include pirates. All the 25-year-old, Colorado high school teacher wants to do is forget that her dead fiancé was a cheating scumbag. Lyn plans a vacation diversion; fate provides Braedon, an intriguing surgeon. She finds herself drawn to him: his gentle humor, his love of music, and even his willingness to let her take him down during morning karate practices. Against the backdrop of the ship’s make-believe world and temporary friendships, her emotions come alive.

However, fear is an emotion, too. Unaware of the sensitive waters he’s navigating, Braedon moves to take their relationship beyond friendship–on the very anniversary Lyn is on the cruise to forget. Lyn’s painful memories are too powerful, and she runs from Braedon and what he has to offer.

Their confusing relationship is bad enough, but when the pair finds themselves on one of the cruise’s snorkeling excursions in American Samoa things get worse. Paradise turns to piracy when their party is kidnapped and Lyn’s fear of a fairytale turns grim. Now she must fight alongside the man she rejected, first for their freedom and then against storms, sharks, and shipwreck.

And here’s the cover!

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The book trailer
Donna’s son wrote an original song featured in the book trailer!

About the Author
Donna-Author Pic 2013Donna K. Weaver is a Navy brat who joined the Army and has lived in Asia and Europe. Because she sailed the Pacific three times as a child, she loves cruising and wishes she could accrue enough vacation time to do more of it with her husband.

At fifty, Donna decided to study karate and earned her black belt in Shorei Kempo.

After recording city council minutes for twenty years, Donna decided to write something a little longer and with a lot more emotion–and kissing.

Donna and her husband reside in Utah, they have six children and eight grandchildren who live all over the world.

You can add the book on GoodReads, like Donna on Facebook or like Rhemalda Publishing, and look for A Change of Plans June 1!