21
07
2009
Eliminate “scaffolding” for elegant deep POV
Posted by Jordan in Technique, tags: character thoughts, Deep POV, diction, head words, jack bickham, scaffoldingUsing “he thought” and “she knew” to reinforce deep POV can actually take our readers out of the story. Eliminate them to let your story shine through.
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