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The promised announcement
All right, last week I promised you some good news. Fortunately, this good news starts with C: Contest!
The first three chapters + synopsis of Façade, my current WIP, were named as a finalist in the Crested Butte Writers’ Sandy Contest, Thriller/Suspense category! Woot!
Even better, I get a chance to revise my entry with the judges’ feedback this week. Then, along with the other four finalists’, my entry will be winging its way to the final judge: Sarah Knight, senior editor at Simon & Schuster.
It’s weird just typing that.
So, I’m off to re-polish my entry!
One more big announcement: along with my mother and three sisters, I’ve started a craft blog! So, if you’re into knitting, quilting, scrapbooking, sewing, baking, home decorating or otherwise creating, please check out Wayward Girls’ Crafts! We have giveaways to celebrate launch week!
Photo by Jason Meredith
KissingDayBlogFest, what else?
Looking for my first page blogfest entry? My bad—looks like this link came up automatically instead. Check out my first page (from a different WIP).
So I’m feeling a lot of (totally imagined) peer pressure today to participate in the International Kissing Day BlogFest.
Okay, so really, I’ve read a bunch of kissing scenes on my favorite blogs—and then when I saw Andrew (Iapetus999) was taking part, I figured I pretty much had to, too
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And I just happen to have an orphan almost-kissing scene sitting around. It’s from an idea I’ve had bouncing around for a while and I finally figured out it should be a YA paranormal a few months ago. I’ve slowly been working on plotting it, but other than this half of a scene and some attempts at the opening paragraphs, there’s not much to the story.
A little background: this scene features Lacey, a high school sophomore who recently became telepathic. She’s had a crush on James for pretty much ever. (He does know she’s telepathic.)
He leaned in and closed his eyes.
Was this really happening? No. It couldn’t be. I mean, I was . . . me. Boys didn’t kiss me.
But he was still getting closer.
I took a deep breath and braced myself, squinching my eyes shut, tilting my chin up—not that I really knew what I was doing, but it was the only thing that made sense.
The seconds seemed to stretch forever, until I could finally hear what he was thinking.
—Geez, Lace, what do you think I’m gonna do? Punch you?
My eyes snapped open and I pulled back. He grinned at me. “James—how can you . . . ?”
“Lacey,” the blame in his tone matching mine. “All you have to do is act like you’re gonna enjoy it.”
I folded my arms across my chest. “Well, maybe I wasn’t gonna enjoy it.”
James’s eyebrows pushed together, pulling his whole face into a frown. Though I wasn’t really close enough to hear his thoughts now, I didn’t have to.
I couldn’t have hurt him more if I’d punched him.
Are you participating? (Don’t forget to sign the Mr. Linky!)
Photo credits: wrapped Hershey’s—nino63004; Hershey’s on parade—Duncan C
July Writing Challenge Results
Last month (is it August already?!), I participated in a writing challenge hosted by Tristi Pinkston. Well, actually, I did almost no writing, unless you count rewriting, but then again I did have two family reunions, a road trip, moving my sister and a long visit from my family in July, so I tried to take it easy on myself.
Yeah, apparently I don’t know what that phrase means.
So I had to lighten my own load with revised goals the first week of the month—and I’m glad I did.
Edit 350 pages of my MS. Woot! I mentioned this before, but not only did I finish the two rounds of editing, I added a bunch of words (side note: once I had a writing client inform me that you cannot use “not only” without the accompanying “but also.” Riiiight.). I’m still working on cutting. Well, not really. I’m working on getting chapters to critique partners, still. My mom read it and liked it, though
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- Read my library books:
Bedford Square (Anne Perry comes very highly recommended—and this counts for the Summer Reading Thing.)Read, now to review.- Death in Holy Orders Decided I’d have to check it out again.
The Plot Thickens: 8 Ways to Bring Fiction to LifeSkimmed. Some chapters might really be useful enough to read again, especially the chapter on “Transcendency.”
Read at least one book off my Summer Reading Thing list.: Lockdown, reviewed last week! Hm. . . . two challenges this summer. Have I ever met a challenge I didn’t like? (Oh yeah.)Continue to mull over the exact plot, premise and motifs for my next WIP. (If I’m feeling really ambitious—or, y’know, stuck on a long road trip—even outline one book or the full story arc.)Mulled like cider, baby. (Um, wow . . . let’s just move on.) I have most of the book outlined, though I still need to clarify a few things and work on the conclusion. Still doing a lot of research in this area, and I definitely want to brush up in the genre before I nail down the characters and events, but I’ve already written a little of the opening. It was tough going, though, and I don’t like fighting with my writing from the beginning, so we’ll see.Stay current on critique partners’ edits.Thankfully, there wasn’t much demand in this area.
Even if you weren’t part of the challenge, how did your writing (or your vacation
) go for July?
Photo credit: Richard Dudley
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Progress report
Note: coming up in our deep POV series this week: Getting into our characters’ heads in two different ways!
Well, we’re almost a week into Tristi Pinkston’s July Writing Challenge. I admitted when we started that my goals were rather lofty, especially given that I’ll be spending the rest of the month with family in town. Plus, my library due date is fast approaching. So I’m revising my goals a bit, and reporting on the progress I’ve made so far.
- Edit 350 pages of my MS:
- Go through my writing partner’s notes on the last
ten chapters. Down to the last five! - Go through the
second half of the booklast eight chapters again to make all my planned changes, addtwo scenesone scene to go! and cut out the parts people skip - Get as many chapters to my critique partners as they can stand.
- Go through my writing partner’s notes on the last
- Read my library books:
Bedford Square (Anne Perry comes very highly recommended—and this counts for the Summer Reading Thing.)Read, now to review.- Death in Holy Orders (Ten guesses why.)
The Plot Thickens: 8 Ways to Bring Fiction to LifeSkimmed. Some chapters might really be useful enough to read again, especially the chapter on “Transcendency.”- The rest of the books will go on my “to be checked out again later” list.
- Read at least one book off my Summer Reading Thing list.
- Continue to mull over the exact plot, premise and motifs for my next WIP. (If I’m feeling really ambitious—or, y’know, stuck on a long road trip—even outline one book or the full story arc.) (Mulling away!)
- Stay current on critique partners’ edits.
Even if you’re not part of the challenge, how is your writing (or your vacation
) coming along?
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July Writing Challenge
Tristi Pinkston is hosting a July writing challenge! For the month of July, we’re setting goals for what we’d like to accomplish in our writing projects, whether that’s words written, pages edited or even research done.
July is set to be a pretty busy month for me—festivities for the Fourth of July (seriously; my husband just called and said he got us tickets to four different events next week), my family here for most of the month, two family reunions, a road trip. . . . I think I’m getting a little ambitious. But we’ll try, anyway!
- Edit 350 pages of my MS:
- Go through my writing partner’s notes on the last ten chapters
- Go through the second half of the book again to make all my planned changes, add two scenes and cut out the parts people skip
- Get as many chapters to my critique partners as they can stand.
- Read my library books:
- Cover Her Face (PD James—the literary edge of the mystery genre. Or so I’ve heard.)
- Bedford Square (Anne Perry comes very highly recommended—and this counts for the Summer Reading Thing.)
- Never Street (An actual PI likes Estelman’s PI portrayal.)
- Death in Holy Orders (Ten guesses why.)
- Farewell, My Lovely (Obviously I’m on a bit of a classic mystery authors bent.)
- The Plot Thickens: 8 Ways to Bring Fiction to Life (I haven’t found a lot of Noah Lukeman’s stuff helpful, but I’m giving him another shot.)
- Read at least one book off my Summer Reading Thing list.
- Continue to mull over the exact plot, premise and motifs for my next WIP. (If I’m feeling really ambitious—or, y’know, stuck on a long road trip—even outline one book or the full story arc.)
- Stay current on critique partners’ edits.
This is a great way to help us reach our goals. By writing them down, we have something concrete to work toward. And part of the challenge is checking regularly at Tristi’s challenge blog, where you get accountability and encouragement. And at the end of the month, we report to Tristi for our final dose of accountability. All of these things can help us achieve our goals.
So what are your writing goals for the next month (well, five weeks—my goals start from today for me)? Share them in the comments or on your blog to participate in the challenge!
Photo credit: Richard Dudley
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Tagged anne perry, book list, challenge, edit, editing, goals, loren estelman, noah lukeman, pd james, raymond chandler, revisions, summer reading thing, tristi pinkston, wip, writing challenge, writing goals
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Happy birthday to me!
My birthday present to myself: finishing revisions on Evidence!
My birthday present to you: an excerpt from Duty of the Priest!
Presents that feel this good without costing a dime (no comment on opportunity cost): priceless.
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Finito
One of these days I’m going to run out of ways to say it, but once again: I’m done! I was worried about the word count there for a while, and there are still some issues that are bugging me and some scenes that need to be fixed (and maybe added), but I just typed “the end.” (Okay, so first I said it over on Twitter.) And despite my concerns, I reached an acceptable 84,000 words.
I’ve got a page of notes of things I want to change, and I want to go through and work on physical descriptions of people and settings (especially the weather). Sometimes I get through first drafts and it’s like this whole story has taken place in a white room with blank-faced people—or at least it could have, from how much description I’ve given.
So the tentative title is Evidence of Things Not Seen. I’m kind of happy with it, even though it does seem a little long. It parallels nicely with Duty of the Priest:
- They’re structurally parallel: both use prepositional phrases with an ‘of’ head.
- Both come from scripture references (Duty is a rephrasing of Doctrine and Covenants 20:46 and Evidence is somewhat obviously from Hebrews 11:1.)
- The first words of the titles, Duty and Evidence, aside from being handy handles to toss around, are also words with strong law enforcement connotations. Appropriate for FBI-themed novels, don’t you think?
Once again, I’m off to revisions!
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Revisions, Round One
Well, three months after I started the manuscript, I think I’m finally done with round one revisions on Duty of the Priest. (I have to be careful about using that working title too much; I’ll get attached and I know they’re going to change it!) My friend is done with her parallel story and I’ve spent the last three days “correlating” them—making sure that they’re consistent wherever they overlap. I’m a one-woman correlation committee
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At this point, I’ve gotten it as good as I can get it while it’s all still this “close.” So now I’m sending it off to my wonderful critique partner for feedback—and to get some distance.
And, of course, now I can really focus on the sequel.
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