What are clues?

This entry is part 2 of 11 in the series Clues in non mysteries

I’m taking a bloggy vacation this week, so we’ll resume this series when I get back! Other posts scheduled later this week, too!

In a mystery, a clue—or at least its definition—is obvious: it’s a little fact that, along with all the others, adds up to finding the murderer and his/her motive and opportunity. These clues include objects at (or from) the crime scene, objects or information relating to the victim or killer, and interactions with the as-yet-unknown killer, as well as red herrings, clues pointing to an innocent but viable suspect, or clues that seem to prove the innocence of the real killer.

In a work that isn’t a murder mystery or thriller, however, there’s often still a central mystery or question that isn’t answered until an important point in the plot: a secret revealed at a key moment, a reversal, a shapeshifter (archetypal, not literal) unmasked, etc. And of course, there’s usually a central element of mystery in the plot: what will happen? These mysteries are the kind of thing that you might mention with a *SPOILER ALERT* warning first (just like you would in a regular mystery).

And just like in mysteries, clues are again the little events, objects, or information that foreshadow the coming revelation: clues that show us a character isn’t who she says she is, a hint that an ally or a rival knows more than they’re letting on, or even just an unusual event or object that the POV character notices (just barely).

The balancing act with all clues is difficult because if we draw too much attention to them, we run the risk of giving away the mystery. A less serious risk would be overplaying the mystery—for minor reveals, if we include too much buildup, the “payoff” of the reveal will be less satisfying.

On the other hand, if we bury the clues too well—or neglect to include them at all—the reader feels like the rug was pulled out from under him. The reader goes from the surprise an author is aiming for right to betrayal.

With this series, we’ll look at several methods of burying these clues, so that our reader notices them just enough, and try to address how much is just enough.

What do you think? What kind of “clues” do you use?

Photo by Paul Kohler

Writing Wednesday III

Welcome back to Writing Wednesday! Since so many of us are writers, I know we all must read lots of writing blogs. So let’s share some of the great things we learn about writing through a fun new linkup! It’s like a blogfest, only easier!Writing Wednesday

Last time, we had six great entries:

Share your best posts on writing today!

What are the rules?

  1. All articles must directly relate to writing. If you see something that makes you think of a writing principle, and you want to participate, I recommend you blog about your thoughts, and then submit your blog post.
  2. You should use a descriptive name so we all want to click on the article: Jordan McCollum wouldn’t be very enticing, but Doing Backstory Right would.
  3. Articles can come from your blog or someone else’s.
  4. If it’s your post, PLEASE link back to Writer Wednesday in the post so your visitors can join in the fun! (You can use the badge below—the code includes a link!)
  5. You can submit up to three articles total.
  6. Posts can be old or new.
  7. You have until Tuesday, 2 August 2011 to submit.
  8. If you’d like to follow me, I certainly wouldn’t object! It’s not required, though.

Why should you participate?

  • We can all benefit from this!
  • Find new blogs and great writing advice—without sifting through the ENTIRE INTERNET.
  • Share the articles you’ve worked so hard on with my 200+ RSS subscribers.
  • It’s a great way to grow a blog!

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How about a prize for one contributor? One link author, chosen at random (only links entered by their authors are eligible), will receive Next time around, I’m thinking about offering a prize for one participant chosen at random. What would you like to see as a prize?

Thanks for participating!

Photo: writing with my new pen by Melanie Cook

Yea or nay for an MFA?

Tomorrow we’ll pick up with our series on clues in non-mysteries!

We’ve talked before about getting an MFA. I’d love to get a grad degree, and I’d love to improve my writing. But in the end, I’m not sure an MFA program is the best choice for me, or for many writers.

And I’m not the only one who feels that way. Gabi Pereira of DIY MFA fame holds a real MFA. She’s grateful for the experience, she’s glad she did it, and she’d do it again, but if you ask her flat out whether she recommends an MFA, the answer is no.

As she actually told an interested MFA student:

“Seriously, if your only goal is to get published: go home, sit yourself at your workspace and write the book. If you think getting an MFA will help motivate you or improve your writing, then it sounds like a good fit for you. But if all you want is a ‘get-published’ card, then just go home and write the book.”

Among other points she makes in a whole series (several of which we mentioned when we talked about it last):

  • An MFA is most likely not the only way to get where you want to be in writing (unless that’s teaching).
  • It’s dang expensive!
  • It’s not the best path to publication.
  • Putting your life on hold to study writing isn’t realistic—learning to make writing part of our day-to-day lives is
  • Non-literary fiction is often discriminated against.

To be sure, there are a lot of positives to an MFA as well:

  • Writing is a priority
  • Reading is a priority
  • You can survive harsh critiques
  • How to work within the writing community

That said, I haven’t totally given up hope. I just have to find a program that is local or low-res, well-funded, into genre fiction… that’ll happen, right?

What do you think? Is an MFA for you?

Photo by Joshua Nixon

Interview on funding self-publishing with Derrick Hibbard

UPDATE: Derrick reached his Kickstarter goal and his book will be out soon!

I met Derrick Hibbard ten years ago at a week-long church camp. Naturally, we’re now Facebook friends. I don’t think he knows I have this photo from when we met:

😀

Derrick is a published author, but he’s going the self-publishing route for his latest novel, The Double Stroller Hand Grenade:

Peter, a bright-eyed and fluffy-tailed new attorney, witnesses the “hit” of the managing partner in his law firm. Because of this inadvertent run-in and supposed link with the mafia, Peter can’t find another job anywhere and is forced to tend his kids full-time while his wife, Alison, brings home the bacon. Peter hates the new job: His young kids are a whirlwind of destruction wherever they go, his daughter suffers from a crippling fear of an imaginary alligator, and he and Alison seem to be growing further and further apart as she works long hours. As it turns out, Alison is not an interior designer, as Peter was led to believe, but is the assassin who killed Peter’s boss—a fact that Peter is none-too-happy about—and things really get crazy when Alison’s peers decide that she is better off dead. What follows is a hilarious romp, as the emasculated Peter has to deal with a super-cool-femme-fatale of a wife, while he and his two kids are mercilessly thrust into a world of gangsters and professional hit men.

The Double Stroller Hand Grenade is mainstream fiction with an edge. It combines lighthearted romantic comedy with thrilling action and suspense.

Perhaps most unique about Derrick’s path to self-publishing is the way that he’s planning to pay for the costs: through fundraising on a social website, Kickstarter. Individuals can give as little as a dollar to help Derrick toward his goal (with various rewards at different pledge level, including copies of the book, dedications, etc.). Derrick’s hoping for $1500, and is nearly halfway to his goal in pledges—but if the other half isn’t pledged by midnight on July 31, Derrick doesn’t get the pledges.

This was actually the first time I’d heard about this type of funding for self-publishing, so I asked Derrick for an interview. Here’s Derrick in his own words, first in the video from his Kickstarter campaign, then the interview.


First of all, I’d like to thank Jordan for giving me the opportunity to do this interview on her blog.

Why did you decide to self-publish?

Well, that answer comes in different parts because it has been a very long process for me to get to this point. I think the main reason is because of the changing industry. Right now, the investment that inevitably comes with publishing novels by new authors is a risk that most publishers won’t take. Obviously, there are some first time novelists who are able to land the agent and get a publishing deal, but they’re few and far between. The industry is in a turbulent “change-mode” right now, with the advent of ebooks and the ease of printing books on demand. I’ve been working with traditional publishers for close to 4 years now, and in my opinion, self publishing high-quality books is a good way to gain experience in the industry and build a platform to use down the road. I figured that I might as well start building that platform and honing my craft instead of letting a pile of manuscripts gather dust on the shelves.

The second reason comes from my experiences with a traditional publisher. I’ve published two nonfiction books, Law School Fast Track, and College Fast Track, and we’re talking about a couple more to add to the “Fast Track” series. First of all, I’ve loved working with a publishing company and I feel that I’ve learned a lot about the publishing process. The only problem that I’ve had is that it takes so long for each title to be released, which is understandable given the amount of time and energy, from so many different people, that goes into each book. Once the book is finished with all of its rewrites, revisions and polishing, I’m ready to start working on the next one, but the book still has a long way to go in the publishing process and the publisher is hesitant to start new projects. The problem is, again, the risk involved with investing in each title. A publishing company wants to wait and see how each title does before jumping in with a new book. I feel that self-publishing (with fiction anyway) will give me the chance to focus on writing. I’ll be able to write a book, do everything it takes to get it ready to publish, release it to the world, and move onto another project.

The last reason, and maybe the most important to me, is that I write because I’m compelled to write. I love everything about writing, creating, and storytelling. I’ve loved it since I was kid and I’m pretty sure that I’ll continue to love writing until I kick the bucket and keel over. The point is, I write because I like sharing stories.

How did you find out about Kickstarter?

From a friend who was trying to get his project kickstarted.

If your book gets funded, roughly what do you anticipate the cost breakdown looking like?

I’m asking for $1,500 for the Kickstarter campaign and the breakdown for the costs are as follows:

  • $35—Font licensing
  • $125—ISBN
  • $200-$400—Cover design
  • $200—Copy Editing
  • $200—Proofreading
  • $400—Interior layout and design
  • $75—Title setup fees with Ingram (a distributor who will make the book available in bookstores, magazine shops, airports, etc., in the US, UK, and Australia)
  • $400—for marketing

What are you least looking forward to with self-publishing this book?

I’m not a huge fan of the technical side to publishing a book. I really prefer the creative process, so I guess I’m least looking forward to making sure all the little details are taken care of in order to publish a high-quality book. Of course, this is all part of the process.

What are you most looking forward to with self-publishing this book?

I’ve been researching internet marketing and developing new strategies for reaching new audiences—so I’m probably most looking forward to finding new readers and ultimately sharing stories with more people.

In parting, here is a cool quote—something that I think is relevant to all aspiring authors, and its something that I try and keep in mind with each new project.

Certain writers do not live, think or write on the range of the moment. Novels, in the proper sense of the word, are not written to vanish in a month or a year. That most of them do, today, that they are written and published as if they were magazines, to fade as rapidly, is one of the sorriest aspects of today’s literature.
–Ayn Rand

Although the quote is a bit pessimistic about today’s literature, I like to use it as a positive motivation: write books to last. Write books that engage the mind long after the story is over.


Thanks for the interview, Derrick! I find this all really interesting, even if I’m not quite ready to look into self-publishing myself. I was glad to get to learn more about this option!

Clues in non-mysteries

This entry is part 1 of 11 in the series Clues in non mysteries

Every book, no matter what the style or genre, has some element of mystery, whether that’s “whodunnit” or “What happens next?” While surprise is fun to play with in a story, the major plot and character movements should really come from somewhere, set up with foreshadowing, or clues.

And let’s face it, these clues are a tough balancing act. We have to let the reader know there’s something coming for them, that these events that don’t seem significant will be—but at the same time, we can’t build small things up too much, or we’ll disappoint our readers instead of rewarding them with the payoff, and probably more importantly, we don’t want to give away the coming twists.

Whether you’re writing a mystery or romance or literary fiction, there’s always something we’ll want to “bury” so our readers don’t realize its significance at first. In this series, we’ll look at what these clues might be and several ways to hide them!

What do you think? What kind of “clues” do you see in non mysteries?

Photo by Jake Bouma

Independence Day Blogfest!

This entry to the blogfest is a bit late; I was traveling for the memorial service on the posting day and didn’t get the time to write like I’d hoped.

The prompt for a piece of flash fiction is: “It’s Independence Day and something unexpected happens . . .” So here we go!


You’d probably think dancing in the arms of Lord Edward Westing, Earl of Sussex (etc.) would be utterly thrilling. But you’d be wrong.

Bertie, as we all call him, is seventeen with bad teeth and worse acne. He’s a little obnoxious, but he’s a good dancer, he’s fun at parties, like tonight’s Carraresi Feast Day ball, and he’s family, if distantly.

He spins me into a dip and I glimpse the glass dance floor, and the orange sunset reflected in the sea below us. This year’s venue, an open-air gazebo over the gulf, is the best I can remember, and the evening’s just begun.

The music winds down and Bertie whips me into one more spin. “You’re getting rusty,” he says. “Hope you’re not planning to impress anyone.”

I look away. There’s someone I want to impress, but I doubt he’s here. I try to surreptitiously scan the crowd, but my eyes are drawn to the white wake cutting through the gold gulf not far away. Heading straight toward us, fast. My stomach plunges faster than it did when Bertie flipped me.

The boat speeds up. I realize my grip on Bertie’s hand is so tight he can’t even squeeze back—then the speed boat leaps out of the water onto the floating bridge, the only way on or off our little island. Two masked men clamber out of the boat, carrying assault rifles.

Dove è la principessa?” one demands.

La principessa. The princess. Me.

They want me.


Rough and sketchy, but isn’t that always the way with flash fiction?

Photo by Alyson Hunt

Fiction and real life

Another time I’ll probably talk about how fiction needs to be like real life, and yet not. It’s fascinating, really, but it’s not what’s on my mind right now.

Sometimes real life gets in the way of writing fiction—and by real life I mean my real life. I always think of the time my cousin broke up with the girl he’d wanted to marry. He came over to my house and we talked about it. At the back of my mind, I couldn’t help but feel a little guilty. Writing romantic suspense at the time, I spent so much time making up imaginary people with imaginary problems and imaginary heartache, and suddenly it almost felt like I was mocking the real pain that people endure in life and love.

Recently this has hit home again as a member of my extended family passed away very suddenly, leaving his wife and six children. It’s very hard to bring yourself to solve an imaginary murder when you’re dealing with the real death of a loved one—especially an accidental death that has left us with a lot of questions, and we won’t get a neat little tied-with-a-bow, with-justice-for-all ending.

Obviously, during difficult times, it’s definitely okay to give yourself a break from writing. I’m not one of those “1000 words every single day” types anyway. But despite all that, I sometimes feel guilty for not writing. I feel like writing would help me work through these things, but mostly the things I think about writing are waaay too close to reality, and I don’t think I’m ready for that.

Do you jump in and write the emotional while your feelings are still raw? Or do your own emotions and experiences get in the way too much?

Photo by Tobias Wolter

Writing Wednesday II

Welcome back to Writing Wednesday! Since so many of us are writers, I know we all must read lots of writing blogs. So let’s share some of the great things we learn about writing through a fun new linkup! It’s like a blogfest, only easier!Writing Wednesday

What are the rules?

  1. All articles must directly relate to writing. If you see something that makes you think of a writing principle, and you want to participate, I recommend you blog about your thoughts, and then submit your blog post.
  2. You should use a descriptive name so we all want to click on the article: Jordan McCollum wouldn’t be very enticing, but Doing Backstory Right would.
  3. Articles can come from your blog or someone else’s.
  4. If it’s your post, PLEASE link back to Writer Wednesday in the post so your visitors can join in the fun! (You can use the badge below—the code includes a link!)
  5. You can submit up to three articles total.
  6. Posts can be old or new.
  7. You have until Tuesday, 19 July 2011 to submit.
  8. If you’d like to follow me, I certainly wouldn’t object! It’s not required, though.

Why should you participate?

  • We can all benefit from this!
  • Find new blogs and great writing advice—without sifting through the ENTIRE INTERNET.
  • Share the articles you’ve worked so hard on with my 200+ RSS subscribers.
  • It’s a great way to grow a blog!

How can I get a cool badge?
Copy the code below and paste it into a blog post or a gadget/widget in your sidebar. (It’s in HTML, so be sure you’re adding an HTML gadget, or select the Edit HTML/HTML tab above the text window on the edit post page.)

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Where do we put our links?
Right here! Please remember to link directly to your post (i.e. ihaveablog.blogspot.com/2011/05/i-have-a-post.html and NOT ihaveablog.blogspot.com—this makes it easier to find the article!) and use a descriptive name (i.e. How to handle backstory and NOT Yippity Skippity Blog!).

Just fill in the boxes below to get started: Check out our contributors this week!

Next time around, I’m thinking about offering a prize for one participant chosen at random. What would you like to see as a prize?

Thanks for participating!

Photo: writing with my new pen by Melanie Cook