AKA Not Features, Benefits
If marketing is getting your product into the minds of your audience, the people who are looking for your solution (or persuading people to look for your solution), how does that help with marketing fiction books?
When marketing nonfiction, it’s easy to figure out what problem you’re solving: it’s what you’re book is about. But when you’re marketing, you don’t focus JUST on what your book is about (the features). You focus on what your book can do for your readers: THE BENEFITS.
What are the benefits? Rob Eagar explains at Wildfire Marketing’s “Marketing Made Simple“:
Book readers, consumers, and donors don’t care about your topic, genre, mission, or product features. Their primary concern is how you can make their life better. Therefore, they want to know the RESULTS that you can create for them. Even people who donate to non-profits need to feel like they’re getting something in return for their donation.
To avoid confusion, I define a result as any positive outcome, life change, or tangible improvement that you create for someone who reads your book, buys your product, or donates to your cause. In addition, the description of a result must be specific enough to generate emotional interest.
That’s great for nonfiction. If your book is about blogging, you focus on how it will make your readers into . . . well, independent thousand-aires. If your book is about parenting, you focus on the result: your child will behave or you will be happy. If your book is about writing, you focus on the benefits: your writing will be better/more vivid/more engaging/actually sell.
So how does that help in selling fiction? What’s the benefit in a book that doesn’t have an easy solution to use? Last week, we established that our audience is our genre and the problem that we solve varies a little bit by genre, but underlying all of them is that we give readers an experience they want: excitement, fun, connection, contemplation, novelty, etc. That “emotional interest” that nonfiction creates is built in for fiction: it’s emotion itself.
Or as author/blogger/marketer Kristin Lamb wrote also last week:
Why do readers buy fiction?
One of the reasons readers are so loyal to authors is because of how that author’s stories made them feel. James Rollins makes me feel like I’ve had an exciting adventure. Sandra Brown makes me feel love is worth fighting for. Amy Tan makes me feel hope and power. J.K. Rowling’s stories make me feel heroic.
Fiction authors are brokers of passionate emotion.
Fiction creates emotions, and those emotions are the reason people buy and read fiction. And not just the emotions characters feel in scenes (though writing characters’ emotion isn’t easy, it’s very much worth it), but the emotions the scenes and the plot and the theme overall create in readers.
I also liked the way Vince Mooney put it, writing a few years ago on Prairie Chicks Write Romance (via):
Fans are Buying a “Basket of Feelings”
I like to think that a romance fan is really buying a ‘basket of feelings’. Fans know that some themes, like the ‘hidden baby’ theme, will provide a predictable set of feelings. When these feelings are in ‘deficit’, fans can actually develop a craving for a given romance theme.
He was addressing romance writers, but this is true in all genres. (He also has a great list of the types of “rewards [AKA benefits] per page” readers look for.)
So how do you market the feelings? You do NOT flat out say, “My book will make you feel strong/heroic/happy/victorious.” As with everything in writing, you show, don’t tell in marketing copy. Yep, despite starting off by saying “Don’t talk about what your book is about,” the fact is, in fiction, the unique value your book adds to the market, the reason why people want to buy it, is found in what your book is about, starting from the genre on down.
This is why it’s so important to make your genre clear through context in something as short as an elevator pitch. Compare these very differently focuses for the same story:
Struggling artist Margaux Williams must overcome her insecurities and face down her fears to prove to herself she deserves a successful career.
Struggling artist Margaux Williams must sacrifice her future to stop the killer who shares her home.
Struggling artist Margaux Williams has one shot at a successful career, until she falls for the one man who could ruin it all.
All those things can happen in the same story (to some degree)—but all those loglines promise very different emotional experiences. We need to be clear on what emotional experiences our audience looks for, and how our book fulfills that search.
The longer our selling opportunity, the more important it is to show readers the kind of experience we offer. Queries and back cover copy, both a couple of paragraphs, give us more time to develop the character and make the reader care about them (a prerequisite for the reader feeling those emotions in most cases), and more time to show the conflict and stakes—all opportunities to show that emotion.
And of course, the pièce de résistance of showing that emotion should be our books themselves. They don’t have to be trite retelling of the same old cliché storyline that sells in your genre, but you should know where your book fits within its genre, who your audience is, and most of all, what experiences they expect—and whether you deliver.
What do you think? What benefits (emotions) do readers look for in your genre? Do you deliver?
Photos by Maëka Alexis (the many faces), Sara (basketcase), and Malik M. L. Williams (book)
That is fantastic stuff, Jordan!
Show them what to expect. What basket you’re bringing to the table.
I’m the queen of awkward (this is a self-proclaimed title that isn’t something most people aspire to) and so all of my books bring with them awkward humor and cringe-worthy moments. But I NEVER thought of marketing that. But why not? Movies do it all the time!
Yes! That’s brilliant! Movies put it in the trailers—and it works!—and we might do book trailers (a subject we’ll definitely cover later this year), but there are lots of other ways to give that same preview taste: sample chapters on our site, short stories, sharing an awkward scene. What else?
Oh, one more idea: sharing real life awkward experiences! That’s especially great for a blog, since it gives your potential readers (and of course friends) the opportunity to experience those emotions, while also being inviting to people who might not read and buy your books—and not depending on a book that might or might not be published or a book that will last maybe a year on the shelves. It’s the perfect marriage of lifestyle and author blog. I’m jealous 😉
And PS: your queen of awkward title & description makes me want to read your writing already 😉 .
Great post Jordan!! This all comes down to the pitch/logline/query/etc., for me at least. You have to go to the heart of what your story’s about, to figure out how to market it. 🙂