The noble goal

It’s been a long time since we talked about creating sympathetic characters, but one of the timeless techniques for character sympathy came back to me last night. We were watching one of our favorite shows, which happens to be a game show. The opening of the show always features short biographies of the four competitors, wherein they almost always predict their ultimate victory and gloat about how much better they are than the competition (whom they’ve never met).

I was all set to really dislike one of last night’s competitors after the usual boasting in her introduction—and then they asked her what she’d do with the prize money ($50,000). She planned to put a downpayment on a home in Brooklyn.

Okay, so that’s not stunning or anything—owning a home has always been part of the American dream. But she didn’t just want a home for the sake of fulfilling the picket-fences plan that’s been programmed into us—she wanted to be able to buy a home in a good area of Brooklyn so her daughter could go to the best school in the city.

BAM! I was on her side in a flash. I was all ready to root against her—until she had a noble goal.

Note that this goal is still kind of self-centered, and not for the betterment of society or anything. But because it’s focused on another person—especially a child (what can I say? I’m a parent, too)—it still helps that person appear sympathetic.

And if it can work on real people, it should work on fictional people. In How to Write a Damn Good Novel, II, James N. Frey argues that a noble goal is key to developing reader sympathy with characters. We need to have a reason to root for the character and hope for his success. Even a despicable degenerate can win readers over if we can sympathize with his goal.

What do you think? What are some examples (from your books or books you’ve read) of characters you didn’t like but still rooted for?

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  1. That’s great, Jordan! I am definitely going to use this idea for one of my more despicable characters. Excellent post.

    Our book club just read THE PERSIAN PICKLE CLUB and we met last night to discuss it. The book was a fun, quick read. It also had a nice narrator voice (1st person). However, there was a character named Rita. I felt shocked to learn that everyone in our club hated her! I never hated her. In real life I would have been a friend to her, and helped her, but I wouldn’t have enjoyed being a best friend to her. The main character acted in this manner, and about three quarters of the way through the book she admitted to herself that she finally understood why Rita acted the way she did–and the mc appreciated her for it, mainly because she could finally see that she and Rita had the same characteristics but that they just applied them to different vocations–the mc to farming, and Rita to the newspaper biz.

    Thanks again,
    c-ya

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