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Elizabeth S. Craig’s Secret Sauce: Subplots

ESC Head ShotWe’re kicking off our guest author secret sauce series today!

By Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethscraig

I’m a real fan of subplots. In fact, subplots are frequently my favorite parts of books and movies. I love to see relationships develop or fail or watch in horror as the protagonist gets thwarted again. Subplots also often show a faster, more linear progression than the main plot (and I’m the tidy sort of person who loves seeing that type of progression.)

So what makes a great subplot?  Here are some different things that subplots might accomplish:

Subplots can create complications or a conflict of interest for the protagonist as they try to reach their goals.

Frequently, subplots are relationships between a protagonist and a minor character (for example, in detective fiction, this could be the detective’s private life and relationships, away from work.) Arguments with a teenage child, the collapse of a troubled marriage, or a budding relationship can add either tension or joy to the story.

Subplots could offer a different side of our protagonist and provide him with more emotional complexity and texture.

Subplots can help provide integration of a theme or hook in your book.

If you’ve got a serious book, subplots can provide moments of levity—or vice versa.  They can help make your story better-rounded.

Subplots can give readers a feeling of satisfaction in terms of plot progression . . . particularly if the main plot seems to be stalling out or if the protagonist’s goal appears out of reach.

Tips for approaching subplot inclusion:

It’s helpful to have a clear arc with your subplots—as with your main plot.  You introduce it, develop it, then tie it up at the end (it’s particularly effective if you tie the subplot into the main plot.)

I like to add subplots in as a separate layer after my first draft is over.  Somehow, this helps me organize it better and weave it more seamlessly into the story.

My subplots will sometimes intersect with my main plots in unusual ways—to save the sleuth in a moment of danger, or provide important clues to help solve the case or gain added perspective on the puzzle.

More help online:            

Here are a couple of my favorite posts on writing subplots.

The first is from a screenwriting site, Cracking Yarns, and the post is “The One Subplot You Really Need.” Interesting reading and very helpful.

The second is from Writer’s Digest (if you haven’t discovered their archives, you’re missing a great resource.) The post is by Elizabeth Sims: “7 Ways to Add Great Subplots to Your Novel.” In it, she covers different ways of including subplots in your story.  A must-read.

Are you a fan of subplots, as a reader or writer? What are your favorite types of subplots to include?

Rubbed OutAbout the Author

Elizabeth’s latest book,  Rubbed Out, launches July 2. Elizabeth writes the Memphis Barbeque series for Penguin/Berkley (as Riley Adams), the Southern Quilting mysteries for Penguin/NAL, and the Myrtle Clover series for Midnight Ink and independently.
Writer’s Knowledge Base–the Search Engine for Writers
Twitter: @elizabethscraig

TBR Tuesday: Perfect Scoundrels by Ally Carter

Apparently, now is the perfect time for me to finally read Perfect Scoundrels by Ally Carter. I’ve read all of the Heist Society books (still catching up with the later Gallagher Girls books), and this has been out since February—so what took me so long? Cheapness. I waited for a library hold to come in. Then, strangely, when I was almost done with the book, I hit the top of the Lendle waiting list, too, and ended up with a loaned e-copy as well.

K, message received: next time I’ll just buy the book.

Katarina Bishop and W.W. Hale the fifth were born to lead completely different lives: Kat comes from a long, proud line of loveable criminal masterminds, while Hale is the scion of one of the most seemingly perfect dynasties in the world. If their families have one thing in common, it’s that they both know how to stay under the radar while getting—or stealing—whatever they want.

No matter the risk, the Bishops can always be counted on, but in Hale’s family, all bets are off when money is on the line. When Hale unexpectedly inherits his grandmother’s billion dollar corporation, he quickly learns that there’s no place for Kat and their old heists in his new role. But Kat won’t let him go that easily, especially after she gets tipped off that his grandmother’s will might have been altered in an elaborate con to steal the company’s fortune. So instead of being the heir—this time, Hale might be the mark.

Forced to keep a level head as she and her crew fight for one of their own, Kat comes up with an ambitious and far-reaching plan that only the Bishop family would dare attempt. To pull it off, Kat is prepared to do the impossible, but first, she has to decide if she’s willing to save her boyfriend’s company if it means losing the boy.

I really loved this book. I love Ally Carter’s storytelling. The voice in the Heist Society series is different than the Gallagher Girls series—and that’s great. Gallagher Girls books are narrated in first person by Cammie, the protagonist (with some epistolary stuff thrown in for fun). The tone is very conversational, very funny, very fun. It’s something like what I hoped to achieve in I, Spy.

Heist Society not only uses a third-person narration style, at times we even take a step back from the third-person limited style and slip into something much more omniscient. The opening scene of Perfect Scoundrels, for example, reads almost like a modern fairy tale—it’s not told from the main character’s POV.

As much as I love deep POV, this is totally the right choice for this series. There are reasons for narrative distance sometimes, and this series has several. But the analysis is for another time. Right now, I just love basking in the rich story world of the Heist Society series. I was sad to see this book end, and I hope there are more adventures for these characters in the future. (*cough*cough*Disney*Hyperion*cough*)

What’s a writer’s night?

This week, Donna K. Weaver and I are hosting a writers’ night (Wednesday, June 19, 7-8 PM, American Fork [Utah] Public Library). The #1 question on everyone’s mind has been What’s a writers’ night?

mini poster2Answer: a night of learning, games and fun for writers! Donna and I will each be making a very short presentation on some aspect of writing—I think Donna will be having fun with apostrophes, and I’ll be digging into show, don’t tell. We’re hoping to make our presentations appeal to writers on all different skill levels, so whether you’re a multi-published author or a total n00b, we’ll all be able to have fun and learn together.

Once we get that learning stuff out of the way, it will be time for writing games! What kind of games? Games to help writers dig into body language, create cool images, generate new ideas and have fun! Plus we’ll generate some extreme flash fiction. What’s not to love about that?

So come join us!

Also coming up: Canada Day AWESOMENESS at the Pleasant Grove City Library! July 1, 7-9 PM! Read more!

What would you do for a writers’ night?

How to “sideload” e-books

I wasn’t sure whether I should cover this, but I’ve gotten enough questions that I can see it’s really important! When you download an ebook file from a site like Smashwords or my store, it doesn’t automatically appear on your Kindle like purchases from Amazon (I wish). But fear not! You can read the book on your device—you just have to “sideload” it.

Kindle instructions | Nook instructions | Other apps to help

Sideloading on Kindle

Once you have the file, you have a few options.

    1. Email the file as an attachment to your Kindle address. You can forward an email if the file comes as an attachment, or attach the file from your computer if you’ve saved it. You can find your Kindle address and set this up at http://amazon.com/myk under Settings > Personal Document Settings. You have to tell which email addresses can send you files. (You must have Wi-Fi service on your Kindle to download them.)

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  1. When your Kindle is connected to your computer, drag and drop the file into your Kindle’s Documents folder. (You could even save it there in the first place, if you want.)
  2. Use a program to help you (more below)
  3. Use Amazon’s Send to Kindle service as a browser add-on, or as a program on your desktop or phone. (Note on this below)

Sideloading on Nook

Since I don’t own a Nook, I found this guide for PCs and Macs (to use after saving the file to your computer):

1. Connect your Nook to your computer with the USB cable. A “Nook” drive will appear in My Computer (PC) or Desktop (Mac).

2: Copy and Paste, or Drag and Drop downloaded PDF or EPUB files into the My Documents folder on the Nook drive.

3: Go to My Library on the Nook, hit View My Documents, and then hit Check for New Content.

4: Select one of the files you sideloaded into My Documents and press Select to open it.

If you have a PC, you can also try this step-by-step guide from the Nook forums:

  1. Buy the book
  2. Open Nook for PC on your computer
  3. Nook for PC should automatically sync to your online account and download the book.  If it doesn’t, click on the sync icon in the upper right corner.
  4. Make sure that My Library – All Items or My Library – eBooks is selected on the left.
  5. If the sort button doesn’t say Recent, click on it until it does.  This will put your new books at the top. (Note, in the instructions for her, I have a picture of this)
  6. Once your book is downloaded to Nook for PC, connect your Nook to the computer.
  7. You should see a popup window that says “DEVICE DETECTED”.  Click yes.
  8. Now you should see a file sharing window.  The left white box is the Nook, the right white box is your computer (desktop).
  9. Click on My Library next to the word Desktop.
  10. Find the book you want to transfer and click on it to highlight it.  If you want to transfer more than one book, hold down the control key on your keyboard and click the next book you want to transfer.
  11. Click on the left facing double arrow between the two white boxes.  This will transfer the files.
  12. Now you should see the books in the left (Nook) white box, indicating they have been copied onto the Nook.  (Note:  They will still be on the desktop side also.)
  13. You have completed transferring the books to the Nook.  Now you need to eject the Nook and disconnect from the computer.
  14. Open Windows Explorer (File Manager), locate the Nook drive on the left pane.  Right mouse click and select eject.
  15. Open the Nook to the library and your books should be there.  If you have the sort order set to recent, they should be at the top.  If not, they’ll either be in author or title order.

Alternate to step 7.  If you already have your Nook connected when you load Nook for PC, then click on “My Stuff” on the left and click on the button at the top that says “Manage Devices” to open the file sharing window.

Software to save you headaches!

You can also use an app like Calibre, which is totally free. It can manage and convert your ebook files (I heard they recently added Word doc conversion!) and transfer files to your device. It doesn’t play well with Kindle collections last I checked (but I never update), but I use it and like it.

Amazon has recently premiered free software to do this as well. Send to Kindle is available as an add-on to the Chrome and Firefox browsers, a stand-alone for your computer—even an Android app. However, the browser add-on appears to be mostly geared to sending web content to your Kindle. The computer app adds an option to Send to Kindle on the menu when you right-click (PC) on a file.

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Now, read & enjoy!


The winner of the I, Spy song contest is (Drum roll please!)

Renae Mackley!!
Congratulations, Renae!

The Mr. Nice Spy contest remains unsolved! Give me some time to think about this one.

The book launch!

I’d be remiss if I didn’t share some about my book launch!

Donna put together a great montage of all the highlights:

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Donna & Me answering questions

A few more shots of me:

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Me signing Me lecturing my 7-year-old to stop asking for my Sharpies!!! Me with author Michelle Davidson Argyle

To be totally honest, I think my reading went terribly—talking slow takes a lot of effort for me, and I needed more to set up the scene. Sigh. But that’s okay. I’ve finally dispelled the lingering gloom from that, and nobody hates me because of it. . . . Right?

Thanks to everyone who came out to support us—and many thanks to the Orem Public Library, Donna, Kristi, & Kim for making this event unforgettable!

Upcoming events: Writers’ Night & More Secret Sauce

My book launch party with Donna Weaver was this past weekend, and it was so much fun! Thank you, thank you, thank you to everyone who came out to support us!

But if you missed out, don’t worry! We’ve got another event coming up very soon!

My next event: Writers’ Night!

It’s Spies & Pirates (part 2): Writers’ Night!

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June 19, American Fork Public Library, 7-8 PM!

Donna and I are working on some awesome writing instruction to help writers at all levels, and we’re also working on some fun writing games to help you think creatively and describe body language and action in unique ways.

I’ve got another event in the works with my inimitable critique partner Julie Coulter Bellon:
canada day1Canada Day Book-e-bration: The Great White North Comes To Pleasant Grove
Pleasant Grove (Utah) City Library, July 1, 7-9 PM
Come Celebrate Canada Day with Your Family at the Pleasant Grove Library—the perfect family night to learn about our Canadian neighbors!

  • Door prizes and drawings
  • Canada fun facts
  • Canada coloring pages
  • Canadian treat samples
  • Canada storytelling

Canadian author Julie Coulter Bellon will also be signing her books at the event along with Jordan McCollum, whose CIA titles are set in Canada. Books will be available for purchase that evening.

Want to keep up on all my events? I tend to announce them on my Facebook page first.

Upcoming series: More Secret Sauce!

Just when you thought your writing couldn’t get any secret saucier (I know you were thinking that, secretly 😉 ), I’m bringing back the Spilling the secret sauce series—sort of. Starting next week, I’ll have a sister series to spilling secret sauce.

But this time, it won’t just be my secret sauce! I’m in the process of lining up guest posts from some fantastic fellow authors about the skills and techniques that they used to take their writing to the publishable level!

If you’d like to be included in the series, please contact me! (I’m not at all trying to exclude anyone, but since the series is about the techniques used to take writing to a publishable level, so please be sure that guideline applies!)

What do you think? Are you ready for a writers’ night? How about some more secret sauce?

TBR Tuesday: Books in your home

So I just moved, and I’m still living among the boxes. Many of the boxes are filled (or partially filled) with books, and now I have to find a place to put them all. Plus one bookshelf didn’t survive the move.

Oh boy.

My son packed and unpacked his own room almost all by himself, including his books. In his old room, he had stacks of books, but in his new room, he has an organizer in his closet, which he’s already putting to good use.
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My daughters had a bin for their bedtime stories. Uh . . . still working on unpacking in there. They don’t have a closet organizer, but they do have a very large built-in desk with plenty of great shelves. Both kids’ rooms also have a shelf along the wall.

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My husband and I had a very full bookshelf in our room, which he mostly packed up. But since they were books we’ve already read—and our shelf is replacing the broken one—they’re low on the unpacking list.

I’ve got boxes of books for my office, too (largely writing craft & research), but for right now, I’m working on filling the living room shelves—sort of. I like organization, but empty space always seems wasteful to me. My husband and I both come from homes with packed bookshelves, in his home often two rows of books on a shelf with more stacked on top. Space efficiency for the win but . . . doesn’t really work in the place where you welcome visitors to your home. Unless the message is that you’re a packrat. Then it’s cool.

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Putting books in the reception area of your home is an interesting conundrum. Do I display books that make us look smart? (College textbooks?) Books that show who we are and what we love—or maybe who we wish we were? Books that match the decor??

Aspirational, inspirational, decorational . . . sounds like the Muppet Show 😉 .

Now, if I could only find places for all the books that weren’t on our shelves before the move . . .
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Where do you put your books? Do you show them off to show off who you are, to make yourself look good, or to make your house look good?

Have you entered the I, Spy song contests?

Whew! What a fun week with the blog tour! We definitely need to celebrate, and what better way than with my chocolate chip maple pecan pie, as featured in I, Spy?

Have you pieced together the clues to find the inspiration songs for I, Spy and Mr. Nice Spy yet? There’s still time to enter the contest to win a $25 Amazon gift card!

As a reminder, there are TWO SONGS to guess (and each song contest has a $25 prize). The clues are found at the blog tour stops:

I, Spy clues

Monday

Renae Mackley* (Also: using your spy skills to convince someone the car you’re driving isn’t stolen!)

M. R. Buttars (Also: using your spy skills to escape annoying relatives!)

Tuesday

Donna K. Weaver (Also: using spy skills on a desert island!)

Bonnie Harris (Also: an I, Spy extra inspired by Bonnie!)

Jinky is Reading* (Also: a giveaway!)

Wednesday

Kathleen Brebes

Rhonda*

Thursday

Me, at Jami Gold’s blog

Tressa’s Wishful Endings* (Also: a giveaway!)

Friday

Lindzee Armstrong (Also: using your spy skills while in labor!)

Christy Dorrity

* = also includes a review

Mr. Nice Spy clues

Monday
Julie Coulter Bellon (Also: using your spy skills to enjoy sweets without having to share with your kids!)

Tuesday

Carolyn Frank (Also: using spy skills with time travel!)

Wednesday

Cami Checketts*

Marnee Bailey, Romance Writers’ Revenge (Also: using your spy skills to figure out what your kids are up to!)

Thursday

Lisa Swinton (Also: spy skills to escape from . . . a cat?)

Chris Jones (Also: the spy skills of a dad!)

Friday

Emily Gray Clawson (Also: figuring out whodunnit)

Andrea Pearson

* = also includes a review

Thanks again to everyone who helped with the tour!

Other blog reviews

I don’t want to leave out some great reviews at non-tour blogs last week!
Debra Erfert’s Windows on Writing

Tamera Westhoff

Whit’s Book World (And she also reviewed Mr. Nice Spy!)

The contest

Remember, you have until 11:39 PM MDT on June 13th (Thursday) to enter the contest! Email your guess to contest at jordanmccollum.com to be entered in the drawing. (Full rules) Now go use your spy sleuthing skills to put together this puzzle!