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Stranger than fiction: the world’s most audacious plagiarist?

Sam Taylor Mullens, a pseudonym, began promoting her third novel in the usual way—taking sign ups for a blog tour, passing out advance review copies to bloggers. Unfortunately, one of the bloggers noticed something strange about The Auction Deal.

4371001458_5e12899950_m It bore an absolutely uncanny resemblance to another novel she’d read. And by uncanny, we mean almost sentence-by-sentence copying. The “author” had taken someone else’s clean, Christian romance and altered it by changing it to first person, switching out character names, paraphrasing virtually every sentence, and adding in sex scenes.

Original, Love to the Highest Bidder ©1998 (republished in 2012 as A Bid for Love) The Auction Deal advance reader copy
The Dark brown curls were everywhere. They were a curse, and had been for twenty-eight of Cassi’s twenty-nine years. They puffed out from her scalp and plunged halfway down her back as if they had lives of their own, helplessly tangled and twisted together. The bathroom lights above the double sink reflected from the brown tresses, bringing out the subtle gold highlights. Dark brunette curls were everywhere. They were a curse, and had been for the thirty-one years of my life. They puffed out from my scalp and plunged halfway down my back. They helplessly tangled and twisted together. The bathroom lights above the sink reflected the brown tresses.

The blogger who discovered this contacted the author of the original book, Rachel Ann Nunes. Rachel tried to contact Sam Taylor Mullens to receive an ARC but Mullens informed her the book would not be published, and declined to provide the ARC. (Eventually another book blogger sent Rachel a copy of the ARC.)

Other bloggers then read Rachel’s original novel, which was already available for free, and verified the prima facie plagiarism themselves. But when one dared to post on her Facebook page about it, three different Facebook profiles with the middle name “Booklover” as well as Mullens’s profile defended her actions, insisted the allegations were unfounded, even when the blogger posted side-by-side comparisons, and began to turn accusations back on Rachel.

Another blogger expressed her support for Rachel, and one of the “Booklover” accounts used her personal profile to accuse this blogger of selling ARCs to pirate sites (making the accusation at least four times in twenty-four hours).

Since then, at least one more “Booklover” has joined the fray (though amazingly, these profiles—75% of which were creating this spring—disappear as soon as they get involved). Rachel has received a number of harassing, accusatory messages, threats to go to prominent and powerful members of her local community, abusive (and obviously fake, IMO) reviews, and increasingly bizarre excuses for how and why Mullens copied her work. Meanwhile, all of Mullens’s novels have disappeared from Amazon.

Truly, if I had a character go to the lengths that these people have gone to protect their “friend” the plagiarist (if they’re even real people at all; careful observation of their comments suggest they’re not), readers would never believe it. Rachel has shared the full story on her blog.

Rachel is now gearing up for what may be a long legal battle. If you want to help take a stand against plagiarism, please consider donating to her cause!

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Critique partners vs. editors

So earlier this month, we talked about what a difference critique partners make. And they do—mine routinely suggest the exact thing I needed to fix a plot line, a story arc, a scene, a character. They are truly amazing.

But even amazing critique groups are probably not acquisitions editors. They may not think like acquisitions editors. As Alicia Rasley has blogged before, sometimes your editor hates what your CPs love, for myriad reasons. It seems sad and counterproductive to think that a book you’ve spent six or twelve months with in critique group may now spent that long in editing because it fundamentally doesn’t work.

Part of that, as Alicia mentions, is the protracted reading your critique partners must do. In a standard critique group format, the group reads a scene or a chapter at a time (or perhaps isolated scenes), while an editor is trying to whip a whole book into shape, hammering out those overarching problems of plot or arc or character that a critique group who reads the book in a drip at a time just can’t see.

But there’s another issue at work, too. In many groups, critique partners’ job is to work with what you’ve got. It’s hard to suggest overarching changes without a high-level vision of the novel, so they do what they can: work on polishing the prose you present. You have to really develop trust in addition to fiction-vision to suggest (and take) the major changes that will make your story deeper, more engaging, more complex (in a good way), more coherent, more resonant.

But those changes are an editor’s job, her wheelhouse. She works not to be your friend but to make your book everything it can be. Her job is to knock it down and make it better.

Your critique partners may be right: your book may be great. Or they may be biased (by incomplete information or lovin ya, goshdarnit). The point isn’t that they’re wrong, but that it’s often beyond their purview—or perhaps beyond what you want them to do—to spot and fix the large-scale problems that an editor will home in on. Your editor’s job isn’t just to be right: it’s to make your book absolutely all that it can be. For the best book possible, use both!

Why I rejected my publisher

My heart-wrenching tale of THISCLOSE

If you’ve poked around my site or been a subscriber for a while, you might remember that in November 2011, I received an offer of publication from a regional publisher, with a 2013 anticipated release. (If you happen to remember the name of my publisher, please refrain from naming names. I’ll do the same.*) Like any publishing offer, it was a long time coming.

Three years and two weeks after I started the novel. Two years after I submitted it to the same publishing house the first time (obviously they rejected it, and with good reason). Eighteen months after an editor at the publishing company told me not to bother resubmitting the revised, newly-award-winning manuscript. Almost nine months after I went ahead and did it anyway.

I got the good news at a writers’ retreat and I was so excited to share with my friends there. After seeing other friends have contracts fall through, I’d always vowed that I wouldn’t make any announcements until after the contract was signed. But the contract would be months in coming—in one author’s experience, they had printed books waiting to be distributed before they got the contract signed.

CONTRACT

I went ahead and made the announcement. So many wonderful friends celebrated with me. It was great. (I finished the manuscript I’d just started when I got the good news.)

While we waited on that contract, they assigned me an editor, who happened to be someone I’ve wanted to work with for a long time. They asked me for the “final” submitted version of my manuscript (although editing was at least a year away). They requested an author photo, then a release from my amazing photographer. They needed tax documents. I got it all turned in.

Finally, the contract came in the mail. I held my breath as I opened that big white envelope and read through those pages with my publisher’s name and mine. And I cried.

But they weren’t tears of joy.

(I wrote another novel.) With a friend’s recommendation, I consulted with a lawyer who specializes in contract disputes and intellectual property law. He spent looong billable hours reading the contract and writing me an extremely thorough analysis. And, yeah, it was as bad as I feared.

Worse.

The deal breaker

In the olden days (ten years ago), a book had a fairly short lifespan: a few months to make or break its print run, languish on the shelves a few more months, then the bargain bin, then it went out of print. After a certain period of time “out of print,” the rights to the book reverted to the author. Hundreds of authors who had trade published books revert to them now have those same books for sale forever as ebooks.

Naturally, I was very worried about the possibility of a book never being declared “out of print” because the publisher had an ebook version on the “shelves.” I might never get the rights to my backlist back unless the publisher was feeling very generous. (We actually did reach a minor compromise on this issue, for shared rights.)

But my lawyer was more concerned with another issue, one that I was anticipating, but didn’t think it would be as bad as the reality. The contract demanded the right of first refusal on basically everything I might write for the next 21 years. If I submitted any work anywhere else, it would be deemed accepted by this publisher, and contractually obligated to them first. There was no timeline in the original contract, meaning they could spend three years sitting on my manuscript, before granting me one year to try to find someone else to take it (after which the time frame and rejection process would start over).

/disapprove

In my opinion, the legal term for that clause would be “unconscionable.” For comparison, SFWA president John Scalzi publicly ripped apart a different trade publishing contract with less restrictive clauses (see his points 0, 1, 4, 5, and 6, but STRONG LANGUAGE). Even within the publishing world, these clauses are beyond the pale.

After consulting with my lawyer on how best to proceed with negotiations, I did what I could. I didn’t ask for a single cent more, no advance, no more royalties. I didn’t ask for my audio, film or foreign rights. I didn’t ask for the right to create my own subsidiary works. I pointed out I had four manuscripts all ready to submit to them. I offered options, options I knew other authors had gotten added to their contracts with this company, and options I knew other publishers used. I gave some, and they gave a little.

Ultimately, however, they wouldn’t budge on the most important issue. They did tell me that if I had a book under contract with another publishing house, they’d revise that ROFR clause (of necessity). I didn’t. My contract with this publisher went on hold while I pursued publication for another book. My editor left publishing for law school. I took my publication year, 2013, off my blog and social media profiles. Then the publisher’s name.

The emotional side

Yes, I did cry when I read the contract the first time. But when it came down to it, this was a business decision. There was no way I could sign over control of my entire career for more than two decades. Even if this was to be my one and only chance, if it came down to a choice between never, ever publishing a book, or taking that contract as it stood, I would rather never publish.

(I also wrote another book. I wrote the first draft of this post. Then I wrote a novella.)

The end

I spent literally years holding out for a better contract. I self-published that second novel I wrote since receiving the offer and the novella and a sequel to each. Both novels were named finalists for the most prestigious award in that regional market (being 2 out of 5 of the finalists). Even after all that, I sent a final message to the publisher. I told them I didn’t want to burn any bridges, but I would need to see changes to these clauses of the contract.

They said no.

So I said no.

I did the unthinkable: I walked away from a publishing contract. I rejected my publisher and published myself. I didn’t (and don’t) need a publisher to turn out top caliber books or even get them to bookstores. I didn’t have to sacrifice my control over my career, my vision for my books or my artistic integrity. It was nice to have the external validation of a publishing offer, but in the end, I didn’t need them to share my stories, and the costs of using their services instead of contracting my own far exceeded the benefits, especially when it came to my career. Shockingly, I’ve made almost as much as I would have anticipated making from going with them, and I still have all my rights and control of these books—and my career.

What do you think? What would it take for you to walk away from a publishing contract?

ADDENDUM: I’m not naming the publisher because the principle I’m hoping to get across—that authors need to be careful of contracts and guard their rights, and be willing to walk away from a publisher who won’t do that—is more important than punishing the publisher. 90% of my audience isn’t going to submit to this small press anyway.

Due to an influx of spam, I’ve had to close comments on this post.

Photo credits: CONTRACT—Steve Snodgrass; thumbs down—Striatic, via Flickr/CC

The Top 10 Fonts You Should Never Use on a Book Cover (and 15 better alternatives)

I’ve liked typography since high school. I’ve even made my own fonts. I believe there’s a time and a place for almost every font—but not your book cover.

font top 10

Your cover’s job is to convince us to read your book, that it’s worth our time and money more than the other 500,000 books out there. Most of these fonts are going to do the opposite: they’re so overused or generic, they have no place on your cover.

font arial
Arial and a number of its sans serif cohorts (Helvetica, Tahoma, Lucida Sans) have become the go-to fonts when we want a clean, sans serif look. Admittedly, they can sometimes work, but Arial . . . unless you want your book to look like somebody’s web page, just leave it alone.

font black jack
I wish I had a collection of all the places I’ve seen this font, starting with my blog header from seven years ago. There’s nothing inherently wrong with this font, I guess, but I’ve seen it on book covers, company logos, signs and more. It was a good font once. Let it die.

font bradley
This one might be leaning a little toward personal preference, but it comes down to this: if your font came bundled with Microsoft Word, it’s probably already overused.

font mistral
This is the font we used to look like you were handwriting something . . . in elementary school.

Along these same lines, Brush Script. Just don’t do it.

font papyrus
Okay, when your font is mentioned by name in a parody, it’s over. This font has been used to “represent” so many times and places that it’s lost all inherent meaning. Ancient Egypt? British Navy? Werewolves? WHY NOT? A local restaurant thinks it screams “contemporary Mexican,” especially in red text over a green hacienda. It screams, “Totally illegible” to me.

font scriptina
This font was already starting to be overused about eight years ago. You want swirly and you want statements, but you don’t want “Oh yeah, that’s the same kind of writing my friend’s blog used ten years ago.”

font chiller
This font is not scary; it’s illegible. This font does not make your book look frightening or suspenseful. It makes it look amateurish.

font tnr
I love Times New Roman. I do. I reset every word processor I use to write in Times New Roman. But the default font of business communications has no place on (or in!) your book. At all.

Possible exception: you’re writing a history of Times New Roman. Then sure.

font dearest
And all other 18th- and 19th-century handwriting fonts. They do not make your book look intriguing, historical or cool. They make your book look cliché.

Possible exceptions: your book is actually set in the 18th or 19th century and involves handwritten notes. Or you’re a pirate.

You, sir, are no pirate.

font comic sans
Just no.

(If I have to explain why, please just take this as a sign that you need to hire a cover designer.)

Viable alternatives

Naturally, in a year or two or five, these could all well become candidates for the list, but here are some legitimate, free alternatives to the above!

Handwriting fonts

Step aside, Mistral & Bradley Hand. Check out these handdrawn fonts from FontSquirrel.com. Of particular note, I like Harabara Hand, Jinky (unless you’ve got a capital J in your name or title . . . totally thought that said “linky”), and Journal. (Caution on Rock Salt, though. Anything Google offers as an option for Blogger headers is probably at the tipping point.)

Sans serif

You can do better than Arial et al. Sans serif fonts at FontSquirrel are a good place to start. My faves are more stylized (Lintel) or sophisticated (Linux Biolinium, Proza, Tenderness).

Serif

Yep, you can use serif fonts on covers. Again, Times New Roman is out (and as this article points out, Trajan and Copperplate are overdone in this department, too). It’s almost hard to go wrong other than that.

For interiors, steer clear of Times New Roman, too. Book Antiqua, Palatino and Garamond are all standard choices, while Bembo, Baskerville and the like are what professionals gravitate toward. Me? I’m partial to Linux Libertine: legible with LOTS of extended special characters. FontSquirrel has more serif options, too.

Script

Let’s do away with BlackJack in favor of some more original alternatives! Try Dancing script or Euphoria script. Going a little fancier? CAC Champagne has served me well, and Great vibes is lovely.

You want something with extra flourish? Pass by Scriptina and consider Miama or Promocyja. Legible and fancy. If you’re feeling daring, skirt the edge of readability with Lovers quarrel.

Choosing fonts

When choosing a font, always remember to look at your title (or name or whatever) in that font. I usually choose my fonts based on those specific glyphs—like the font in my header (from P22 type foundry). I chose it for the J glyph; I actually had to alter the M to get what I really wanted.

If you’re really, really picky, or you want something even more specialized, I suggest shopping at MyFonts.

Matching a font you’ve seen elsewhere? Try Identifont (describing it according to a limited set of letters) or MyFont’s WhatTheFont! (upload image).

No affiliate links here, folks. I’m that committed to typography.

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Indie author resources blog fest!

Today is the day! Link up here!

When you publish your own works, everything comes down to you. You have to find and hire the editors, proofreaders, cover designer, interior designer, e-book formatter . . . it can be daunting to line up all those other professionals to make your book come to life at last.

I read many great blogs on self-publishing, and I’m not looking to change the overall focus of my blog. However, I do really want to acknowledge the amazing support staff I’ve worked with in producing my books. So I’m putting together the . . . Indie Author Resources Blog Fest!

indie resources blog fest

Today, Monday, January 20, if you’re an indie author—or if you just happen to know of an editor, cover designer or other publishing professional who does quality work—post about them on your blog, and come back here to link up below!

How to participate

Indie author resources blog fest1. The theme is Indie author resources. It’s all about showing some love for all those people who helped make your book great. So who do you put in your post?

  • Editors—content, copy, line, and proof
  • Designers—cover, interior, e-book, and other promotional graphics
  • Formatters—e-book, print
  • Printers—print-on-demand, short run, long run, promotional materials
  • Any other professionals who helped make your book the best it could be!

Be sure to include links to their websites!

2. If you’re not (yet?) an indie author, but you know exactly who you’d hire, please join in!

3. If you wouldn’t recommend their work, don’t include the person in your post.

4. Post your resources on your blog January 20, 2014, and add it to the Mr. Linky here. Link your post back to the blogfest on here so your readers can read other entries, too. (The best link is http://JordanMcCollum.com/indie-resources/ )

5. Read, enjoy, and comment on other entries!

6. The index! After the blog fest, I’ll be compiling a list of the recommended professionals for ease of use. I’ll link back to all posts, of course!

So, in short: on January 20, write a blog post about an e-book professional, link back here in your post, and sign up on the linky.

Join in now!

Thank you to everyone who signed up in advance (you can find that list here). Please be sure to link up today with the link DIRECTLY TO YOUR POST, i.e. http://yourblog.blogspot.com/2014/01/indie-author-resources.html.

Again, DO NOT PUT IN YOUR PLAIN BLOG URL (http://yourblog.blogspot.com). If someone comes back to click on your link in a month, they won’t be able to find your post and they will leave your blog frustrated and disappointed!!

FULL URLs, PLEASE!!!

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My indie author resources

indie resources blog festToday is the Indie Author Resources Blog Fest! I’m sharing my best indie author resources—and this Thursday, I’ll also premiere a self-publishing nuts-and-bolts column at Janice Hardy’s blog, The Other Side of the Story!

I’m a planner. I tried to go about doing everything the exact perfect way, and I spent six month seriously working on the run-up before I published my first book—after it was written and polished and prettified.

The legal stuff: setting up your publishing company

I am not a lawyer! This is not legal advice! This is the process I followed.

  • File for a Doing Business As (DBA) with the state to create a sole proprietorship
  • File for a federal EIN with the IRS
  • File for a state tax number
  • File for a city/county business license

When using your FEIN with a DBA, remember that you need to use your name, not your DBA’s. This gave me a bunch of problems with signing up with Nook Press, until I called the IRS and asked. (I heard a rumor that they actually want to make sure you do your taxes right, so they answer questions. Gasp. Same with the state tax commission. They’ve answered my questions that would seem extremely stupid to anyone who’d done this before.)

I bought my ISBNs direct from Bowker. Since my publishing plan (and my writing file!) already includes more than 10 ISBNs (one print and one digital per book), I bought a block of 100.

The writing

I’ve had the privilege of working with some great editors. Angela Eschler and Heidi Brockbank edited I, Spy, while Jenn Wilks came through with fantastic rush jobs on Mr. Nice Spy and Spy for a Spy.

Of course, I have to give major credit to my critique partners, Emily Gray Clawson and Julie Coulter Bellon. They are basically my content and structural editors, and they are phenomenal. But they’re not for hire, sorry.

The pretty stuff: design, layout & formatting

You know how they say you can have a job done good, fast and cheap—just pick two?

They’re wrong. Steven Novak, my cover designer, is talented, fast, and very reasonably priced! He is the reason I wanted to do this blog fest, and I cannot recommend him highly enough (and I’m ecstatic to be sharing more of his work this week!!). With my first cover, I had so many revisions even I wasn’t sure what I wanted anymore, but Steven put up with all of my changes. As soon as I nailed down my vision, he nailed the perfect image, and I fell in love with my first cover.

DIY Queen: everything else I did myself

I put the indie in indie author. I really like to go my own way, so I did a lot of the work myself. By hand. So instead of sharing service providers, I’m sharing links on how I learned these skills.

I did my own ebook formatting. To format an ebook from scratch, if you have knowledge of DOS, HTML and CSS, the tutorial at BB eBooks is excellent. It took me a couple days to learn everything and create the necessary files, but I can use that book as a template. I made the images for the book interior in a free image editor, Paint.NET, except, of course, my author portraits, which were taken by award-winning photographer Jaren Wilkey.

I also did my own print interior layout. I learned many principles of interior book design and book typography from The Book Designer blog written by Joel Friedlander. His guides to book design were indispensable. He also offers affordable print book templates for Word, but I finalized my design a couple weeks before he premiered them, dang it. For finding free commercially licensed fonts, I recommend FontSquirrel.

I’ve used CreateSpace and Alexanders for printing my book. Brigham Distributing is my distributor.

(My books are a labor of love. I’m not getting into the business of formatting print or e-books, and although I love you dearly, I won’t do it for you.)

Come share your indie author resources today!

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Anatomy of best seller

Hey, guess what! I can now add something really awesome to my résumé. I have attained the (dubious?) honor of an Amazon best sellers list.

Well, actually, a whole bunch of Amazon best sellers lists.

It’s kind of a long story, so here’s the shortest version I can tell. I wrote my prequel novella, Mr. Nice Spy, with the intent of giving it away as a freebie. And I did that. Some. But I had it for sale most of the time. With my new release coming up and the Bookmarked Bargains event two weeks ago, I decided to try to make it permafree on Amazon. I lowered the price on Smashwords, Kobo and my site and put out the word to report it to Amazon price matching. Some other authors told me Amazon would not match those sites, so I kinda figured, what could I do? And said the bargain price was still 99¢.

How many sales does it take to hit a category best seller list?

Not very many for the paid lists. The first day of the event began and the sales began rolling in! By the time I hit about 25 sales, I checked the book’s Amazon listing and there it was! I was a best seller in the categories of Espionage and Spy Stories & Tales of Intrigue.

MNS best seller rankings

Jump for joy!

As my sales continued, my book climbed a bit higher on the charts—my one claim to fame might be that I outsold Valerie Plame’s novel for about an hour 😉 —but eventually my sales dropped off in the evening. I figured that was probably natural, and they might pick up again in the morning. Or they might not. I was just thrilled to have made it once.

The next morning, my sales were still level. I didn’t move a single unit all day, though my other book, I, Spy was still selling. Finally, in the afternoon, I saw this tweet:

I virtually patted this poor soul on the head. My book was 99¢, silly. But then another person tweeted it:

At this point, I thought maybe I should check it out. So I did. And there it was: free.

And there it was: top. ten. on the Free Espionage list.

MSN best seller free ranking
(At the peak.)

I’d missed this in my sales report page because the “Free Pricematch” column is so far to the right that it wasn’t automatically showing on my screen, and I actually didn’t know it was there. When I checked, I’d already moved hundreds of free books.

I watched the numbers climb all day. In the end, through that weekend, I “sold” nearly 1000 free books (983, to be exact). I got as high as #3 on the FREE Espionage books list, and I also ranked on several other lists: Free Thrillers; Free Mystery, Thriller & Suspense; Free Romance Mysteries & Suspense; Free Romantic Suspense. So that’s two paid lists (that I know of; I didn’t think to check these things before it went free) and five free lists. It also broke into the top 5000 paid books and top 500 free books on ALL of Amazon.

This kicked off one of the more awesome weeks of my life. There was so. much. freaking. awesome in this week that I can’t do it justice in one post. Okay, I couldn’t do it justice in any number of posts, but it’s going to take at least one or two more to try.

Just to whet your appetite, here’s a quiz: I also A.) took a ride in a private plane, B.) got to know a former CIA officer, and C.) spent an entire day evading the surveillance teams pursuing me while making dead drops, social engineering and figuring out how to survive in this city.

Oh wait, it’s D.) all of the above. (And yes, B and C are related. And no, no part of this is exaggeration, though it is a tiny bit of marketing.) Well, and E.) had a new niece, but really, a new baby to love is better than the other stuff, so it isn’t fair to compare.

What do you think? Do you ever look at Amazon best seller lists?

How to write discussion questions for your novel

A couple weeks ago, I got a phone call from my sister-in-law. Her book club read I, Spy (!), and they wondered if I could provide any discussion questions.

Questions?If you’ve never seen this before, sometimes a book will include five to ten questions at the end to prompt and guide discussions of the novel. Often you see these in general fiction aimed toward book clubs, like These is my Words and The Secret Life of Bees.

I’ve been to book club meetings where there’s kind of nothing to talk about but the facts of the book—and even those aren’t in debate—so I definitely understand the desire for that kind of help. Of course, I also could’ve used some help coming up with those questions 😉 .

I figured I wasn’t the only one, so I wrote up with some ideas on how to come up with discussion questions for your novel.

Think about your theme

I really hope you’ve done this before you published 😉 . Beyond the events of the plot, what is your book about? In reality, you probably have a major theme and some minor supporting themes. Maybe you’ve tapped into the power of because.

Contemplate your characters’ journeys

What do your characters learn along the way? How do they change and grow because of the events of the story?

Ponder the plot

Rehashing the events of a book does not a book club make. They’ve all read it. How else might the events play out? How did the plot events affect the characters, and the readers?

Consider your characters

What are their attributes and flaws? How are they like—or unlike—people around you? How do their flaws affect the story?

Now: talk about how that applies to the reader

Take those concepts you’ve brainstormed by looking at these areas, and start thinking about how they apply to your readers and their lives. What can they talk about? How can they relate?

Open-ended questions (how, why, etc.) are better at prompting discussion than questions that can be answered with a yes or no. Yes/no questions can build to bigger discussion questions, however.

If your book deals with forgiveness, perhaps you could include discussion points on how to forgive, why we forgive, what you can and can’t forgive other people for, etc. Ask if they’ve ever known someone like this character, or what aspects of themselves they saw in that character. After X event, Character Q feels like he’s been abandoned by his last hope. Have you ever felt that way?

My discussion questions

So here’s what I came up with!

  1. Talia has to keep a secret from the man she loves. Have you ever kept a secret from someone you love? How did that affect your relationship?
  2. Talia learns that love can be a source of strength. How has love made you stronger? How else has love changed you?
  3. Danny feels betrayed by Talia. How have you dealt with someone you love lying to you?
  4. After months of training in DC, and several months of more in-depth instruction far away from family and friends, CIA trainees are allowed to bring their closest family members for a family weekend. As part of the weekend, family members are loaded onto a bus for a tour of the Farm facility.

    One year, the instructor-turned-tour guide clapped his hands and welcomed the family members to the CIA.

    One woman leapt to her feet. (In some stories, she’s even holding a young child.) “The CIA?” she exclaimed. “My husband works for the CIA?!” Could you forgive someone for something like that?

  5. Elliott has a hard time keeping his work and family priorities straight. (Don’t we all?) What would your priority be in his situation? Could you balance better than he does?
  6. Talia is afraid of commitment partially because of her family history, especially her parents’ failed marriage. How have you seen the effects of relationships across generations?
  7. Do you think you would make a good spy? Why or why not?

What do you think? How have you or would you come up with discussion questions?

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