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The novel I (might?) let go

This entry is part 10 of 13 in the series All my novels

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I am surrounded by young adult authors. That is, authors writing for young adults. Like, surrounded. Where I live, on the Internet—to find another author writing to an adult audience is actually a challenge most of the time. Plus, I know (ish) a lot of very, very successful YA authors—awesome agents, big book deals, best sellers. So I get lots and lots of chances to think about whether YA is for me.

The answer is usually no, not really.

Except for this one time.

The book stats

Title: Slash and Burn. Maybe Scorched Earth. Maybe that will be the sequel.
Genre: YA post-apocalyptic (Not dystopian. There is a difference.)
Inspiration: A very vivid dream, inspired by the TV show Falling Skies, shortly before Nano 2012. As in, like, weeks.
Writing dates: November 1 – 20, 2012.
Length: 69,265 words.
Back cover copy: The war for Earth is over. But the battle’s just begun.

In a depopulated post-apocalyptic California, 17-year-old Adrienne Lucas has finally found some semblance of normalcy in a collective farm led by her father. Then newcomers arrive, promising a return to the comforts from Before. Adrienne’s father represents the voice of reason against the newcomers’ siren song—until they silence him forever.

Adrienne’s devastating loss is compounded when she discovers the man she’s loved for years, the man who saw her father as practically his own, the man who lives in her home as part of her family is also the man who betrayed her father and sentenced him to death.

Now Adrienne will destroy them all. Starting with him.

Or, in video form:

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What I learned from this book

Well, obviously, I learned that I can write YA. It was nice to take a “break” from the strong voice of I, Spy, with a different voice. Interestingly, it was still in first person, present tense, and still had plenty of humor, but it was a very different tone. I hadn’t written anything remotely speculative in over a decade, so it was kind of fun to go back to that. And of course my husband is big on emergency preparedness, so it was fun to use him as a consultant.

But probably the most important/interesting thing I learned from this book was letting go. A week or two after I finished it, I opened it up again to export from my trial version of Scrivener, and . . . I just didn’t really “feel” my novel. It was a rough first draft, of course, but something was (and still is) missing for me, especially the passion and the drive to go back to it.

Funnily enough, I’d kind of forgotten about that over the last year and just came across my posts about that as I was trying to track down my final word count. I slotted the book into my production schedule down the road, but . . . we’ll see. It’s a cool story, but as I realized (quoting Natalie Whipple): “this business is too hard to waste effort on something you don’t 150% love.

What do you think? How do you rekindle passion for an old project?

COVER IMAGES: Girl: Self-portrait by Kelsey; Fire by Marion Doss;
Blood drips: Pooling Blood by Joleene Naylor; all via CC

And we’re off! Scheduling your way to Nano success!

NaNoWriMo can be a pretty crazy time—crazier if you don’t plan ahead. No matter when you do it, doubling or even tripling your work time isn’t easy, at least not if you’d like your life to, you know, not fall apart.

Planning in advance is one key to making it through Nano without alienating everyone around you. Plotting your book, of course, helps, since you don’t have to stop to ponder where your story is going next and how you’ll get there.

But there’s another kind of planning that can make or break your Nano productivity: your schedule. For me, I went through and wrote down everything that I needed to do in a day to keep the rest of my life from falling apart (and if my life falls apart, my four kids’ and my husband’s lives most likely will, too, and that’s not fair to them, no matter what month it is). We’re talking meals, face time with my kids, and the bare minimum housekeeping tasks. I also wrote out some things I need to do weekly and monthly, and a few one-off tasks I need to finish (Christmas shopping for our Christmas-at-Thanksgiving celebration).

I assigned a time for the daily and weekly housekeeping tasks—and I found I had a surprising amount of time left for writing once my schedule was in place—and if I follow the schedule, not only does it afford me more writing time, but my house actually runs better and can even be cleaner than it normally is!

But now I have to be careful not to squander that work time. My friend Kathleen Brebes won Nano 2010 in thirteen days and she had some tips on scheduling for success:

A big helper to finishing my novel in thirteen days was that I had made a pact with myself not sign on to the internet until my daily writing was complete; I didn’t even check AI stats [our writing group] or Nano stats until my daily writing was finished. But, I did keep up with my daily housework schedule and DayMinder Agenda. However, the second week of Nano, I didn’t walk or lift weights; I only stretched daily. And, I made sure not to neglect my spiritual and familial commitments.

from A Succor for Writing . . . by Kathleen Brebes: Succor: My First NaNoWriMo.

Now, if a first-time Wrimo can hit the goal in 13 days—and still make time to keep her house running smoothly—I hope we can all get inspiration from that.

What do you do to keep on your writing schedule this month? What do you let slip—and what can’t you let slip?

Photo by Dru Bloomfield

Originally from Nano 2011 & 2012

Plot 101 wrapup

All this month on Twitter, I’ve shared 101 amazing articles on plotting advice. #Plot101 has been a lot of fun! I wouldn’t want you to miss out, so here’s a list of all the articles I’ve shared.

plot101(This is taken right from my Tweet list, so article authors are attributed with their Twitter handles, or not at all if they didn’t have a Twitter handle, or if it’s an article by me.)

Are you laboring under these outlining misconceptions? @KMWeiland

Got ideas? Put them together to build a novel @JodyHedlund

Can you use coincidences in your plot? @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Nontraditional outlining @DIYMFA

Outline your novel in 30 minutes @AliciaRasley

Action & reaction to build your plot @JodyHedlund

Pulling your story out of nowhere @NatalieWhipple

Must pantsers plot?? @JamiGold

Should pantsers rely on themes? @JamiGold

Top 10 Plot problems @AliciaRasley

Character or plot? Or both? @NathanBransford

What’s wrong with your opening? What comes next? @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Plotting a novel with FreeMind diagram @spacejock

Beat Sheets for Pantsers @JamiGold

Is outlining worth it? @KMWeiland

Visual storyboarding with Trello

Prepare with a plotting notebook! @JodyHedlund

Plotting process in action @Janice_Hardy

No plot? No problem! Find one! @JodyHedlund

Plotting a novel in 3 acts @JanalynVoigt

Beat these common plotting problems! @KristenLambTX

Do you have a plot? @NathanBransford

Plot your opening right @JanalynVoigt

Snowflake method of plotting

Plots are like onions. Or parfaits! @Janice_Hardy

Think more creatively: try these ways to brainstorm plot & scenes (I know I will!) @LiveWriteThrive

Are you missing a plot?

Speed outlining

Plotting with emotions @Janice_Hardy

Plot template to keep you on target @Janice_Hardy

When the worst SHOULDN’T happen @Janice_Hardy

5 golden rules for a good plot

3 acts, 3 risks @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

How to get a plot @lucreid

Plotting a character-driven novel: 3 steps @RobynDeHart

Outline your book in two sentences @NickThacker via @KMweiland

Has your plot been done before? Add a new twist @Janice_Hardy

Use characters to max out conflict @KristenLambTX

Ten tools for creative outlining

Romance beat sheets @JamiGold

Dig into your conflict @Vickihinze

How to write a novel @NathanBransford

Outline your novel backwards @KMWeiland

Character-based plotting

Diana Wynne Jones’ plotting method

What comes next? Figure it out! @Janice_Hardy

Novel Outlining!

Got a theme & a problem? Get a plot! @JanalynVoigt

Having trouble starting your story? @JamiGold

Have you ever outlined longhand? Why you should try @KMWeiland

Bring your characters together to clash–and find a plot @LiveWriteThrive

Leading up to turning points @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Can pantsers plot? @Janice_Hardy

Do you have too much plot? @Janice_Hardy

Underground outlining

Weave your character’s inner & outer journeys together! @JamiGold

Is this scene moving the story forward? Simple test @Janice_Hardy

What’s the worst that can happen? GO THERE @Janice_Hardy

Outlining as you go: the best of both pantser/plotter worlds? @JodyHedlund

Story structure for pantsers @KMWeiland via @Janice_Hardy

Don’t let plot bunnies hijack your story! @JanalynVoigt

Is this story worth writing? 1/3 @JamiGold

Is this story worth writing? 2/3 @JamiGold

Is this story worth writing? 3/3 @JamiGold

Develop your characters for better plot @TheresaStevens

SHOW your character’s traits in the plot @TheresaStevens

Plotting from character: core conflicts @TheresaStevens

Using opposing characters & conflict to move the story @TheresaStevens

The four parts of a story @storyfix

The turning points of a story @storyfix

What to do in Q1 of your story @storyfix

The all-important First Plot Point! @storyfix

Escape the sagging middle: Q2 tasks @storyfix

Shore up the sagging middle: pinch points @storyfix

Turning points: the mid-point @storyfix

Q3 of your story: THE ATTACK @storyfix

Turn for the worse: the Second Plot Point @storyfix

Q4 of your story: resolution @storyfix

My conversion to plotting

Becoming a plotting convert

Becoming a story architect

Most basic story structure: 3 acts

All about Story Questions

Five act story structure

3 and 5 act structure in action

Pros & cons of 3 act structure for plotting

Intro to the snowflake method

Customizing the snowflake method @Carol Garvin

Pros & cons of snowflake method

Hero’s Journey plotting method

Character archetypes in the Hero’s Journey

Applying the hero’s journey

Combining the hero’s journey with romance @FayeHughes

Drawbacks of plotting with the Hero’s Journey

Plotting with StoryStructure

Story Structure plotting example

Hero’s Journey + Story Structure for plotting

Setting up your story question

Plotting with Save the Cat! @alicross1

Plotting with a beat board @alicross1

Story questions @AnnetteLyon

What are your favorite plotting resources? Are you ready for NaNo?

Character Arcs is here!

This entry is part 7 of 7 in the series Subplots

We’ve finished our series on subplots, but we haven’t touched on one of the most important types: the character arc, the character’s emotional journey of growth. And that’s because I’ve been working so hard on the book about that very topic.

Hooray! It’s here!
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On Kindle and in paperback

With more formats coming soon!

“Amid the vast number of books that focus on the what and why of character arcs, Jordan McCollum has created a refreshing guide that demystifies the how. Any writer interested in learning more about how to create a realistic character arc and smoothly add it to their story will benefit greatly from this book.”

—Becca Puglisi
author of The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression

WHY DOES YOUR STORY MATTER?

CHARACTER ARCS show the events of our story are worth reading about.

In most works of fiction, the major characters don’t just experience the events of the plot—the story changes them. They learn and grow, ultimately succeeding at the climax of the story because of all they’ve gained. Even the greatest plot in the world can ring flat if the character’s internal journey isn’t dramatic enough. For a character to truly resonate with readers, he should change and grow over the course of the story.

CHARACTER ARCS will help you:

  • Give your readers a powerful experience in any genre
  • Discover your character’s arc: their internal, emotional journey.
  • Implement that character arc to make your readers root for your character.
  • Keep your story moving by using external plot events to prompt your character’s internal growth.
  • Revise your character’s arc for maximum impact.
  • PLUS a special chapter on using character arcs in romances, family dramas & other relationship stories.

Far from a write-by-numbers manual, this approach examines the basic mechanics of character change to show you how to apply these principles in your own work, with numerous examples.

Add power and resonance to any story—master character arcs!

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Anatomy of best seller

Hey, guess what! I can now add something really awesome to my résumé. I have attained the (dubious?) honor of an Amazon best sellers list.

Well, actually, a whole bunch of Amazon best sellers lists.

It’s kind of a long story, so here’s the shortest version I can tell. I wrote my prequel novella, Mr. Nice Spy, with the intent of giving it away as a freebie. And I did that. Some. But I had it for sale most of the time. With my new release coming up and the Bookmarked Bargains event two weeks ago, I decided to try to make it permafree on Amazon. I lowered the price on Smashwords, Kobo and my site and put out the word to report it to Amazon price matching. Some other authors told me Amazon would not match those sites, so I kinda figured, what could I do? And said the bargain price was still 99¢.

How many sales does it take to hit a category best seller list?

Not very many for the paid lists. The first day of the event began and the sales began rolling in! By the time I hit about 25 sales, I checked the book’s Amazon listing and there it was! I was a best seller in the categories of Espionage and Spy Stories & Tales of Intrigue.

MNS best seller rankings

Jump for joy!

As my sales continued, my book climbed a bit higher on the charts—my one claim to fame might be that I outsold Valerie Plame’s novel for about an hour 😉 —but eventually my sales dropped off in the evening. I figured that was probably natural, and they might pick up again in the morning. Or they might not. I was just thrilled to have made it once.

The next morning, my sales were still level. I didn’t move a single unit all day, though my other book, I, Spy was still selling. Finally, in the afternoon, I saw this tweet:

I virtually patted this poor soul on the head. My book was 99¢, silly. But then another person tweeted it:

At this point, I thought maybe I should check it out. So I did. And there it was: free.

And there it was: top. ten. on the Free Espionage list.

MSN best seller free ranking
(At the peak.)

I’d missed this in my sales report page because the “Free Pricematch” column is so far to the right that it wasn’t automatically showing on my screen, and I actually didn’t know it was there. When I checked, I’d already moved hundreds of free books.

I watched the numbers climb all day. In the end, through that weekend, I “sold” nearly 1000 free books (983, to be exact). I got as high as #3 on the FREE Espionage books list, and I also ranked on several other lists: Free Thrillers; Free Mystery, Thriller & Suspense; Free Romance Mysteries & Suspense; Free Romantic Suspense. So that’s two paid lists (that I know of; I didn’t think to check these things before it went free) and five free lists. It also broke into the top 5000 paid books and top 500 free books on ALL of Amazon.

This kicked off one of the more awesome weeks of my life. There was so. much. freaking. awesome in this week that I can’t do it justice in one post. Okay, I couldn’t do it justice in any number of posts, but it’s going to take at least one or two more to try.

Just to whet your appetite, here’s a quiz: I also A.) took a ride in a private plane, B.) got to know a former CIA officer, and C.) spent an entire day evading the surveillance teams pursuing me while making dead drops, social engineering and figuring out how to survive in this city.

Oh wait, it’s D.) all of the above. (And yes, B and C are related. And no, no part of this is exaggeration, though it is a tiny bit of marketing.) Well, and E.) had a new niece, but really, a new baby to love is better than the other stuff, so it isn’t fair to compare.

What do you think? Do you ever look at Amazon best seller lists?

Novel eight!

This entry is part 9 of 13 in the series All my novels

The other day I was reading an interview with Chris Baty, the founder of NaNoWriMo, with some frequently asked questions about everyone’s favorite writing month. One of them was “I’ve already done NaNoWriMo. Why do I need another unfinished manuscript in my drawer?” He responded, basically, that you never know when your next novel will constitute a major breakthrough in your life or your craft. His breakthroughs, I believe he said, were novels six and twelve.

That answer resonated with me, because I knew right away which were my breakthroughs: novels three and eight.

The book stats

I, Spy coverTitle: I, Spy
Genre: Romantic suspense
Inspiration: A song on the Dollar Tree sound system. You can find some pretty cool stuff amid the junk at the Dollar Tree, but this is easily the best thing I’ve found.
Writing dates: Idea: 13 Feb 2012. Writing: 10 March – 31 March 2012.
Length: First draft—70,000 words. Final version—84,000 words.
Back cover copy: Canada is probably the last place you’d expect to find an American spy. But even idyllic Ottawa has its deadly secrets—and so does CIA operative Talia Reynolds. She can climb through ventilation shafts, blend in at the occasional diplomatic function, even scale buildings (small ones). But there’s one thing she can’t do: tell her aerospace engineer boyfriend Danny about her Top Secret occupation.

It worked for a year, keeping Danny in the dark, keeping him away from danger, keeping her secrets. And then Talia finally catches a hot case: Fyodor Timofeyev. Russian. Aerospace executive. Possible spy?

She can make this work, too—until Danny needs her at the same time her country does. And when Fyodor targets Danny? Suddenly her schedule isn’t the only thing suffering. Now to save her secrets and her country, Talia must sacrifice the man she loves.

What I learned from this book

A few quick facts: this book was the second book I fast drafted. Coincidentally, it was also the second book I took the time to not only revise and edit, but to polish to the point of publication. This was the first book I’d set somewhere I’d actually been (Thanks, Dad!), which helped in coming up with the locations they visited. Though this was my third novel in first person, and it was my first in present tense. Once upon a time, I was not a fan of either, but as I was working on the first chapter, parts of the narrative would just flow better in first person.

But really, the thing that dictated both the person and tense of the book—the reason this book was a breakthrough for me—was the character’s voice. This voice was one of the strongest I’d ever contended with written. Before I started writing, I knew I wanted the book to be funny and . . . “loose,” but I hadn’t figured out exactly how to do it. Frankly, it just kind of popped into my head with the first sentence of the book. I was so excited to latch on to it, I had to get it down right away. BUT I was saving this idea for a NaNo-like challenge that started the next day, so I wouldn’t allow myself to write it down. So I grabbed my phone and recorded it.

I won’t keep you in suspense: the fabulous first line is “I don’t do catsuits.” (Go ahead, read some more from the first chapter.)

The voice was sometimes so strong that I had to reel it in a bit, because the interior monologue interrupted the flow of the action or dialogue. And other times, while reading it aloud in critique group, I’d start rambling on in Talia’s voice, and my CPs would tell me what I’d said was so funny I had to include it.

This book was also what I used in an advanced deep editing course from Margie Lawson. I’ve loved her previous classes, and I still apply the EDITS system to everything I send to critique partners. But this time, I went through every. single. page. of my novel hunting for ways to tighten, power up, refine and beautify. I think it shows 🙂 .

And of course, since this became my first published novel, I learned a whole lot about the publishing process! I learned how to make an ebook. I learned how to make a print book. I learned how to get ISBNs, a business license, an awesome cover designer, editors, blurbs . . . everything.

The publishing side is a lot of work, but I do love that I can have everything in my book exactly how I want it. Or so I keep trying to tell myself as I haul myself through the publication process on two more books. AAAGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

Which novels were your “breakthroughs”?

Book Blast: A Light in Dark Places (and giveaway!)

A year and a half ago, one of my brand new critique partners had some exciting news: her friend had come to her for help writing a memoir as catharsis for a family tragedy. That family tragedy was something that had made national news. I’m very excited to participate in the book blast to share with you a book that goes beyond the tell-all tabloid coverage to share an important message of hope with everyone! Plus, a giveaway for $50 (and a free entry if you like my Facebook page!)

light in darkA Light in Dark Places

In December, 2009, Susan Cox Powell was reported missing from her home in West Valley City, Utah. As law enforcement tried to piece together what had happened to Susan, her husband, Josh Powell, became the only person of interest in the case.

For Jennifer Graves, Josh’s sister, the nightmare started long before Susan’s disappearance. From her experiences growing up in the Powell family to the terrifying moment when she first started to believe her brother was a killer, she relied on her faith to stay strong. She devoted herself to the safety of Susan’s boys, Charlie and Braden, whom she hoped to be able to raise as her own. When the boys were murdered by their father in February, 2012, Jennifer was more than devastated, but she had to believe there was a reason for it all—including the deaths of her beloved nephews.

In A Light In Dark Places, Jennifer shares her struggles and her triumphs. In coming to terms with such tragedy she finally was able to embrace the truth that we all have the power to choose our own path—and there is always hope, no matter how dark things may seem.

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Praise for A Light in Dark Places

I love true accounts of people overcoming challenges and helping others with the lessons learned from them. This story of Jennifer’s experiences throughout her abusive childhood, and later the disappearance of Susan and the murder of her two sweet nephews is just that. She shares how she felt God’s hand in her life, guiding her to make better choices than the rest of her family did. Though the book had so many sad details, it ended with hope, courage and love. ~D. Raymond

To finally read about details that were never shared brought closure for me about this insidious crime. While the book was an easy read, the message shared about breaking the cycle of abusive relationships is invaluable. It truly does take someone removing themselves from their abusive family’s presence to stop the cycle. Praises to the author for sharing her perspectives. ~Arlene

 

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JenandEmAuthorphoto1Jennifer Graves (left) is the mother of 5 beautiful children, 2 girls and 3 boys. She and her husband have been happily married for 19 years and together have been active in their community and church.

Jennifer is the sister of Josh Powell who killed his 2 sons, Charlie and Braden, as well as himself in February of 2012, and is also believed to have killed his wife, Susan Cox Powell, in December of 2009.

She is the recipient of the 2013 ChainBreaker of the year Award, given for breaking the chain of abuse and violence in her family.

She enjoys homeschooling their children and mentoring in classes for the commonwealth school they attend. She also loves reading, playing card and board games, and learning new things. Most of all she loves to spend time with her husband and children. They currently reside in West Jordan, UT.

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Emily Clawson is an author, a mother and a mentor. She traditionally writes inspirational fiction. This book has been a life changing experience for her and she is grateful to have been a part of telling this story. She resides in Taylorsville with her husband and four children where they run their leadership mentoring programs for youth.

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Don’t Miss The Writers Helping Writers AMAZING RACE!

Angela Ackerman & Becca Puglisi at Writers Helping Writers (formerly The Bookshelf Muse) have added two more books to their Descriptive Thesaurus Collection: The Positive Trait Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Attributes and The Negative Trait Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Flaws. To celebrate, they are hosting a race, and not just any old race, either. It’s the…

 

Writing is hard, isn’t it? Create the perfect hook. Make your first page compelling. Craft an amazing 25 word pitch. Knock out a query that will blow an agent’s mind. On and on it goes. And sometimes, well, you just wish someone would help.

WISH NO MORE!

From October 21st until October 27th, Writers Helping Writers is posting an OPEN CALL for writers. You can fill out a form, requesting help with critiques, book visibility, social media sharing, blog diagnostics, advice and more.

An army of Amazing Racers are standing by (ME INCLUDED!) waiting to help with your submissions. How many people can we help in a week? Let’s find out! Did I mention there are Celebrity Racers too–amazing authors and editors who know their way around a first page. Maybe one of them will pick your submission to help with!

Each day this week, there’s an AMAZING giveaway, too. So stop in at Angela & Becca’s new Writers Helping Writers website and find out how to take advantage of this unique, pay-it-forward event for writers. I’ll see you there!

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