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Does your story have a plot?

plot chainEvery story has events. Stuff happens. But a group of events happening to the same people doesn’t necessarily constitute a “plot.” For a story to have a plot, the events must be related through cause-and-effect and build to a climax.

Do stories have to have a climax?

If you’re using a linear story structure, the short answer is yes. If you’re using a linear chronology within your story, the answer is double yes.

plot chain labeled
Most stories use a linear structure as well as a linear timeline—the events of the story occur in chronological order.

However, events merely happening in order doesn’t make a plot. The events must also be linked by cause and effect. For example, as E.M. Forster said,

The king died and then the queen died is a story. The king died, and then queen died of grief is a plot.

That little phrase, “of grief,” makes a world of difference. Our brains might fill in the causal link between the events of the first “story,” but that’s actually a logical fallacy (one of my faves: post hoc ergo propter hoc, after this therefore because of this). There could be any number of reasons why a couple might die in succession: perhaps they both had the plague or were hit by falling rocks. (Heck, in this single-sentence story, we don’t even know if the events happened close together!)

“Of grief” links the first and second events as cause and effect; it turns the two from coincident events into connected events. The next event occurs because of the previous one.

cadena rotaWithout this cause and effect link, the events of our story don’t build on one another. They don’t move a story forward. They’re just an account of people doing one thing, then another. At some point, a lack of cause-and-effect gets aggravating, since the events of the story don’t actually have logical relationships. They don’t have anything to do with one another except that they’re happening to the same characters.

Using cause and effect to build to a climax

Another integral part of any linear structure is the ultimate climax. Our plot events must be linked in cause-and-effect chains that build the intensity and stakes to the final, ultimate moment of confrontation between the protagonist and the antagonistic force (external, internal, natural, or any combination of the above).

Cape Disappointment is DisappointingI have read way too many stories that have a series of chronological events that may or may not be causally linked, but that never build to this ultimate moment of the climax. But the climax is indispensable in linear structure. It’s that moment that shows us what our characters are made of, what they’ve learned in our story, how they’ve grown. With the climax, we see the reason why every event in the story was significant. Without a climax, none of them are, and the story just sort of . . . stops. It’s the climax that ultimately gives our story meaning in a linear structure.

But my story jumps around in time.

Awesome! But a nonlinear timeline doesn’t exempt you from the requirements of telling a satisfying story with structure. The vast majority of stories use linear structure, even if they don’t use linear chronology.

Your jumping around in time narrative (time traveling or just nonlinear) can still build toward a climax. Movies like Memento and books such as the Mind Games series by Kiersten White play around with a linear timeline, interspersing scenes from the past. Those scenes from the past build tension and inform—but they don’t get in the way of building to a climax, the final confrontation.

Why structure

Good stories use structure; excellent stories use structure to their advantage. As brilliant author Jennifer Crusie puts it in a blog post that I’ve pondered for years:

Structure isn’t just a way to tell a story, it gives meaning to the story, it informs and intensifies the story, it says β€œThis is what is important here, this is what you need to pay attention to.” Most of the time, most stories need linear structure[.]

Here’s a simple litmus test: if your story isn’t composed of events that are linked by cause-and-effect building to a final confrontation, you may not have a “plot.” Do you need one? If you want to sell commercial fiction and you aren’t a master of alternate story structures, usually.

The good news, however, is that you might be able to revise your way to one! Remember:the best way

Revision is your chance to make the events of your story make sense and carry significance for your character and your readers!

Photo credits: chain—Legozilla, broken chain—Javier, Cape Disappointment—Aaron, map image courtesy of The Journey 1972 (South America “addicted”), all via Flickr/CC

Plot 101 wrapup

All this month on Twitter, I’ve shared 101 amazing articles on plotting advice. #Plot101 has been a lot of fun! I wouldn’t want you to miss out, so here’s a list of all the articles I’ve shared.

plot101(This is taken right from my Tweet list, so article authors are attributed with their Twitter handles, or not at all if they didn’t have a Twitter handle, or if it’s an article by me.)

Are you laboring under these outlining misconceptions? @KMWeiland

Got ideas? Put them together to build a novel @JodyHedlund

Can you use coincidences in your plot? @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Nontraditional outlining @DIYMFA

Outline your novel in 30 minutes @AliciaRasley

Action & reaction to build your plot @JodyHedlund

Pulling your story out of nowhere @NatalieWhipple

Must pantsers plot?? @JamiGold

Should pantsers rely on themes? @JamiGold

Top 10 Plot problems @AliciaRasley

Character or plot? Or both? @NathanBransford

What’s wrong with your opening? What comes next? @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Plotting a novel with FreeMind diagram @spacejock

Beat Sheets for Pantsers @JamiGold

Is outlining worth it? @KMWeiland

Visual storyboarding with Trello

Prepare with a plotting notebook! @JodyHedlund

Plotting process in action @Janice_Hardy

No plot? No problem! Find one! @JodyHedlund

Plotting a novel in 3 acts @JanalynVoigt

Beat these common plotting problems! @KristenLambTX

Do you have a plot? @NathanBransford

Plot your opening right @JanalynVoigt

Snowflake method of plotting

Plots are like onions. Or parfaits! @Janice_Hardy

Think more creatively: try these ways to brainstorm plot & scenes (I know I will!) @LiveWriteThrive

Are you missing a plot?

Speed outlining

Plotting with emotions @Janice_Hardy

Plot template to keep you on target @Janice_Hardy

When the worst SHOULDN’T happen @Janice_Hardy

5 golden rules for a good plot

3 acts, 3 risks @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

How to get a plot @lucreid

Plotting a character-driven novel: 3 steps @RobynDeHart

Outline your book in two sentences @NickThacker via @KMweiland

Has your plot been done before? Add a new twist @Janice_Hardy

Use characters to max out conflict @KristenLambTX

Ten tools for creative outlining

Romance beat sheets @JamiGold

Dig into your conflict @Vickihinze

How to write a novel @NathanBransford

Outline your novel backwards @KMWeiland

Character-based plotting

Diana Wynne Jones’ plotting method

What comes next? Figure it out! @Janice_Hardy

Novel Outlining!

Got a theme & a problem? Get a plot! @JanalynVoigt

Having trouble starting your story? @JamiGold

Have you ever outlined longhand? Why you should try @KMWeiland

Bring your characters together to clash–and find a plot @LiveWriteThrive

Leading up to turning points @TheresaStevens, @AliciaRasley

Can pantsers plot? @Janice_Hardy

Do you have too much plot? @Janice_Hardy

Underground outlining

Weave your character’s inner & outer journeys together! @JamiGold

Is this scene moving the story forward? Simple test @Janice_Hardy

What’s the worst that can happen? GO THERE @Janice_Hardy

Outlining as you go: the best of both pantser/plotter worlds? @JodyHedlund

Story structure for pantsers @KMWeiland via @Janice_Hardy

Don’t let plot bunnies hijack your story! @JanalynVoigt

Is this story worth writing? 1/3 @JamiGold

Is this story worth writing? 2/3 @JamiGold

Is this story worth writing? 3/3 @JamiGold

Develop your characters for better plot @TheresaStevens

SHOW your character’s traits in the plot @TheresaStevens

Plotting from character: core conflicts @TheresaStevens

Using opposing characters & conflict to move the story @TheresaStevens

The four parts of a story @storyfix

The turning points of a story @storyfix

What to do in Q1 of your story @storyfix

The all-important First Plot Point! @storyfix

Escape the sagging middle: Q2 tasks @storyfix

Shore up the sagging middle: pinch points @storyfix

Turning points: the mid-point @storyfix

Q3 of your story: THE ATTACK @storyfix

Turn for the worse: the Second Plot Point @storyfix

Q4 of your story: resolution @storyfix

My conversion to plotting

Becoming a plotting convert

Becoming a story architect

Most basic story structure: 3 acts

All about Story Questions

Five act story structure

3 and 5 act structure in action

Pros & cons of 3 act structure for plotting

Intro to the snowflake method

Customizing the snowflake method @Carol Garvin

Pros & cons of snowflake method

Hero’s Journey plotting method

Character archetypes in the Hero’s Journey

Applying the hero’s journey

Combining the hero’s journey with romance @FayeHughes

Drawbacks of plotting with the Hero’s Journey

Plotting with StoryStructure

Story Structure plotting example

Hero’s Journey + Story Structure for plotting

Setting up your story question

Plotting with Save the Cat! @alicross1

Plotting with a beat board @alicross1

Story questions @AnnetteLyon

What are your favorite plotting resources? Are you ready for NaNo?

Plotting a novel with a beat board

This entry is part 23 of 24 in the series The plot thickens (Mwahahaha)

Our series on plotting is a perennial favorite on the blog, so we’re expanding on that series with a few guest posts! Ali introduced me to Save The Cat! and I really loved using it on my most recent manuscript, so she’s here this week to explain the basics of this plotting method and how to use a beat board.

By Ali Cross
Used with permission from this post

I use a corkboard, (but you can use a wall, or whatever) and a stack of index cards (or sticky notes). My crit group just gave me a new package of index cards–they know me so well! Thanks guys! 

Don’t freak out over the size or color of your cards. Just use whatever. You can use colored pens if you want (I usually only use colored pens if I’m beating out a story with multiple points of view–each main character gets their own color.)

Now, using a couple strips of masking tape, divide your corkboard (or whatever) into four even sections (three strips of tape.) This denotes Act I, Act II part one, Act II part two, Act III.

It should look like this:

ACT I
ACT II part one
ACT II part two
ACT III

Now, get out your beat sheet and your index cards.

On your first card, jot down your notes for the Opening Image. Tack it/tape it/whatever right at the beginning of your Act I section.

Your next card is #6 on the Beat Sheet; the Break into Two card. Place it at the very end of the Act I section.

Next, #7, B Story, at the beginning of the Act II, part one, followed by #9, Midpoint, at the end of that section.

#10, Bad Guys Close In, goes at the beginning of the second Act II, followed by #13, Break Into Three.

Your last section starts with #14, Finale, and finishes with #15, Closing Image.

Now, fill out your cards for the remaining beats and tack them to your board where they belong. You’ve probably got some scenes in your head, so jot them down on a card and figure out where they belong. Your beat sheet should give you a pretty clear idea where it goes on the storyboard. Go ahead and stick your cards up there.

Action scenes, or beats that involve multiple scenes to play out, get stuck to the board in cascading groups. You can see what I mean in the photo of my board:

It’s easy to see where the holes are, but I’m not worried. In fact, I’m kind of happy about it. This outline keeps me in line by pinning down the beginning, middle and end, but allows me the freedom to work out all that fun middle stuff.

If I get an idea for a scene I can write some notes on it and add it where it belongs. That way, I’ll know exactly where to add that scene once I catch up to it. And when I’m sitting there, all out of Mike ‘n Ikes, my mouth hanging open as my gears try to get the writing going, I can look at the board and know what I’m supposed to work on next.

Whew! That was a lot of info! If you have any questions, feel free to ask them in the comments and I’ll do my best to answer in there. 

About the author

Ali Cross is the sensei of the writer’s dojo where she holds a black belt in awesome. She lives in Utah with her kickin’ husband, two sparring sons, one ninja cat, two sumo dogs and four zen turtles.

She’s the author the young adult urban fantasy series Desolation, and a member of the Author’s Incognito Executive Committee.
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